Brilliant characterization for Vossler. I love the way you blew life to the characters as in the other fic you've written as well.

The characterization of Vossler in this story is fantastic, and I must admit that the interaction between Ashe and the fallen knight of Dalmasca is intriguing. The dark desperation of the Dalmascans who are losing their country is captured very well, and at no point did I ever find myself wondering if a certain character would truly act the way you used them.

I would love to see more of this story, if there is more that you would like to tell.

As always, floored by your ability to bring such life to the characters you write and stil keep them so true to what they've always been.

Oh...WOW. That was really great. I love how you write Vossler.