Please continue the story

ummmm, well, turns out I've already downloaded the story. Please scratch that.

is downloading cancelled? I download then read offline as I have to, I can't read this fic

Please continue this story

Well after 10 chapter of this, apparently, abandoned fanfic I must say I was hooked but finally even if it's good I don't like the way you made Naruto characters (especially Naruto in fact).

I mean It's the One Piece world and it's too much Naruto like. Now I don't mean creating Luffy-like or Zoro-like characters but they should have more of One Piece essence. For example the humor and serious/sad moments are well adapted (it's a 80% Fun and 20% serious and not the contrary like in Naruto) but as for personality and strength Naruto is too "weak" and insupportable (even more than the orinal character actually) while Strawhats main members are supposed to be attractive and at an already pretty hugh level.

It's well done though but I feel like it's a Naruto-characters-who-have-transported-in-OP-world fanfic than a Naruto-characters-born/adapted-to-Op-world-fanfic and also once again you're pretty harsh with Naruto and make him too much of a bastard

Now it is/was your fanfic so if you feel like it's how you would see the a crossover with these 2 universes it's good and once again it was interesting and cool to read but it just bother me for some point so I will stop watching it especially considering it's probably abandoned. Speaking of which I don't know if it's a relevant to post a review but why not it's for respect :p.

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Still not much to say about it

Not bad but nothing's really drawing me in to keep reading yet since it's really just naruto being in one piece and not a whole lot has changed or happened

Also, I'd naruto is only 13, you realize he's 2-3 years younger than luffy since zoro is 16 before the timeskip

Sad for Naruto, but he's got some slight hope

Not mich to say since Naruto being there and beating Mizuki was the only change so far in one piece

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Like ur story,

Mind if I try to beta it too? Plz 'advertise' the fic I'm going to write

I can't help with the plot, but I will happily do grammar and the like

I'm hooked

PLZ HURRY UP!

PPPPLLLLLLLLLLLZZZZZZZZZZZZ

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BTW, i'm thinkin' of writing my own story inspired by the fanfic god named kenchi, and you. Can't think of a name yet.

Perfect. Just perfect

This is the best fanfic I have every read, and i have been reading fanfiction for over two years

I beg of you, PLEASE continue your amazing work on this.

I would pay for this if i could

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You can punch me... You can kick me... Oh what the hell, you can even kill me. But if you lay even a finger on one of my friends... if you lay a finger on one of my NAKAMA...
I'LL KILL YOU- Monkey D. Luffy/ Mugiwara no luffy

Naruto is to young, dosnt fit, why would you have Naruto at age 12 when Luffy is alot older?