Reviews for Rain |
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![]() ![]() ![]() but what did he do? i'm crazy curious |
![]() ![]() ![]() ROFL, damn, this was the last story of yours that I read, and your writing is just sooooo goooooooooooooooooooooooood! Please write more Zutara fics, pwease, pwease, pwease with a cherry on top? |
![]() ![]() I love it. I'm a sucker for Zutara fan fics. They just pull me right into the writer's world. When I get hooked on someone's fan fiction, I usually become extremely obsessed withit...kind of like my freaky obsession with 'Avatar' and 'Harry Potter'. Write some more! Celestia White |
![]() ![]() hahahahaha... good story. But you should make it longer |
![]() ![]() Very good! I definitely like your style of writing, but I wish it was longer. I don't have any suggestions; its awesome! I know I'm not being that helpful, sorry! However, I do like that its romantic! Overall, its fantastic! |
![]() ![]() longer. make it longer. please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gah... what did he do to her? Use her to finally capture Aang? Kill him? Use her as bait for an ambush that.. killed Sokka or Toph or something? Aww, I love how she can read him through kisses. What a great way to get to know Zuko! (You don't want to make what face? The pouty, no-reviews-sad face?) |
![]() ![]() Sweet story. |
![]() ![]() Hey Kaytee! Once again, awesome story! Please post your CSI: Miami one soon! Its really good! (all you people out, there, read her story or I'll force you to read my terrible 24 parodies!) Yes, Kaytee, i do have some, in my mind. |
![]() ![]() I love you babe. I remember proofing this during 2nd period band. Great job. We're all proud of you. ~Skittles |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was really cute! i loved it! yes, it's a wonder what you can come up with during band class. what do you play? i play flute :] |
![]() ![]() It was an awesome story. It would have been even better if you had written more.(Ha! Ha! Ha! You should have seen this coming.) Luv ya |
![]() ![]() ![]() *sniffle* That was so beautiful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked it, good job! |
![]() ![]() Hey, waz up Mrs. Brady? Is Tom okay? I hope he does well in the playoffs. Not :( Ha Ha! Hey man, I'm so proud of you for writing these stories. Its a really good way to boost you writing talent. Rain is awesome :) I'm going to read The Mario game soon. Good luck! |