Nice start. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

This is a wonderful beginning! I so wish you had continued!

yay! You updated. :)

More! MOAR!

Is there any chance you continue this story?Your other story,the puzzle was also really good

Best wishes,R

your story is really good! the idea with fate is great. Why did you never continue it?

this is really good. please continue

Wow, cool idea. Could you make your chapters a little longer please? Poor susan, having to save the world again.

TeatimeXSusan rocks!

KAK

Your last story left me a little hungry for some good ol' S/T, much to my surprise.

You're pretty talented with the Pratchett style of writing, which makes the whole thing all the more plausible. I like it. A lot. And I absolutely adore how the other gods want fate killed just cause he cheats at cards. :)

Anyway, hurry up and write more! I'm in love with this story already. I'm in the process of writing some Teatime stories myself and hopefully they'll be up by X-Mas if you wanna read them.

Keep up the good work!

(Also, I could be wrong, but isn't Death's library in Alphabetical order?)

hey. i'm enjoying. i'd liek to see how you pair these two. plesae updaate.

very cute story, i always thought they'd make an interesting couple.

“You used to say that to make Mum tidy her bedroom.”

...Priceless. For this alone, this story goes in my C2 in the hopes that you'll update one of these days.

One nitpick: I thought Death's library was organized alphabetically...? Other than that, though, interesting premises, good writing, and I'd love to see what happens at Mrs. Cake's. Update soon?

So, they're about the same age.

And seeing as there was a good 13 seconds between, the Disc must not have all THAT many people . . .

Continue, please? There aren't many Teatime stories.

Man, if I had access to everyone in the world's biography I would exploit it so much...anyway, intriguing first two chapters. Continue soon please?

FOR THE LOVE OF PETE UPDATE

Susan and Teatime have got to be one of the most inspired pairings ever. ;

By the way, I found this through the LJ community, Teatime_Fans but I can't get to any other ones. Could you help, please?