Love the story. Please finish this. Wahhh! I've been reading this 3-4 times from chapter 1-13 already and I can't take it anymore. Hope to see your stories soon. :)

The line breaks help with the scene changes and small time skips. :)

G'day I'm from Australia and I LOVE this story so much! You write it so well and you don't rush the story process, like I've seen some other authors do. Please, please continue this lovely story it would be a waste to leave it how it is and also *coughs* I'll be really sad too *gives puppy eyes*

I thought this chapter was the best writing wise! You can really see how much you improved.
And now I want some action! Konoka ans Setsuna are finally back together and Im dying to see them getting all lovey dovey. Pretty please?
Thanks for the new chapter
ErzaVsErzaFan

SO GOOD,DATE PLS!I'LL SUPPORT YOU !

aww, and I was busy but read (through all the chapters again) anyways. As interesting as before :) hopefully there'll be more chapters soon!

poor person secchan, I hope and be stolen to konoka and flee together hahahaha more konosetsu yeiii
PS:I had never seen that story, but I like,and I would like to see the next update :D

D: no more chapters...

Hey. If I can recall, The last chapter I read years ago was chapter 5. That was the time I didn't have a fanfiction account. Now that I have my own account a year after that. I had a hard time looking for this story until today. Read it and I still can't help but admire your work. Although it is still a long way, I'm still waiting for it. :) I wish I knew what happened after that. I hope I will hear from you again. Never give up. No matter how many years has past, someone out there is waiting for the climax, including me.

I love ur story please update soon

truly is a great story, cant wait to see what next if you ever plan on finishing this, hope you do :)
if not thanks for whats been writen so far.

please update love the way you write the character's.

Okay, in each chapter I was totally surprised with each twist and turn your story took! It's very well drawn out and written - I can imagine all the scenes right in my head! I love it! You do a really AWESOME job at writing, and I can't wait until the next chapter! I read this, a few chapters a day, and each day i always wanted to read more, but I wanted to leave some for the next day. It's really funny, sad, and happy at the same time. Please continue it!

Angel981

Very interesting and somewhat exciting plot, seems like a long way to being completed however. Hope you keep on writing as I'm sure to read what comes out :)

There are subtle mistakes but none that actually matters, don't worry about the minor mistakes and just write! As long as us readers get the point (and more chapters/story) we don't really care much about errors, not like anyone is grading a paper.

This fanfic is actually decently well-written, above the average here, so just a word of encouragement that there are still people wanting to read your story.

Need more chapters...its 2a.m...school tomorrow... bt want to read more...update soon!... desperate to find out how konoka will...*yawn*...react to see setsuna and her new physical changes...you got major...*yawn...writing talent...UPDATE SOON PLEASE!