Great job on the one shot. I love it.

This was, frankly, heart-wrenching in some places. The way you structured the story might have been a bit off, but it's barely noticeable and testament to your writing skill as a non-native English speaker!

- Nixon

I think I just died from a gorgeous fluffy overdose.

D'aw!

And that's all i'm going to do for the next ten minutes...

Wow, that's really sweet and lovely, and also a bit heartbreaking...

Is this a one-shot? Hope not, I would really love to read more of this one.

Kitty

It's me again as I said before, I read this story as well. It's so sweet. If I got enough time between my exams I really want to translate it, too. And by the way: your English really improved from that last story to this one. I'm going to read another one of your fics now "

- Elfenwesen

I enjoyed this story. Very sweet, very touching and very romantic!

Yay 4 them livin happily ever after that was so CUTE.!

This was wonderful! You have an enchanting writing style, and I never would have guessed that English is not your first language.

Lines such as: "mint scented angels made of light" and "her soul was leaking through her eyes, one drop at a time" were very beautiful.

I loved this story!

It is really well written, I love it.

“It’s not going to be easy, Steph… there’ll be many people that will never accept... us.”

That sounds like if he were a robot/monster or something XD. Age diference is not a big deal in my country, my grand father was 35 and my grandma 17 when they got married.

I love sporta/steph fanfics, they should be a real couple in the show, they match so perfectly.

i loved it :) it was so well writin, please keep up the great work

This was a really good story! I enjoyed it very much. Your English is very good too, nothing to worry about!

*melts*

Lovely story! Oh, more of the same when we're talking about SportaSteph is always a good thing, considering the sad lack of good SportaSteph stories out there (sometimes I reallve CRAVE for them...).

Your english is almost flawless, so you don't have anything to worry about in that aspect, and your writing style is excellent, very fluid, very romantic with just a tiny bit of angst to prevent excess of sappyness. _

You really are a talented writer and I was really glad when I saw another story from you. Here's to you writing many more SportaSteph!

You write better than a lot of native English speakers, you should be proud. The opening paragraph switched back and forth between past and present tense ('will' instead of 'would'), but everything was grammatically sound for the most part.

I loved the, it's cute how Stephanie always manages to get her way one way or the other. Great job.

More SportaSteph, yay! Very well written story. I could definetly picture it in my head as I was reading it. Look forward to reading more of your stories.