Reviews for Twisted
grasswhistler chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
Since you said you'd rewrite this...I'm favoriting it! It's awesome! I like stories that progress a little bit slowly, not really fast, and I love how you made the characters hold back. Thank you!
MiseryInMemories chapter 11 . 6/9/2013
ERMAHGEEEERRRRD! I love this story sooooooooo much! I have been dying for new stuff lately. I've had so much trouble finding stories with good plots, twists, fluff, not so fluffyness (if you know what I mean ;P), that are actually written well! I'm so stalking your other stories...like right now... So happy to finally find some more decent material! Arg keep updating! Now! I'll give you cooookies :P seriously though, loving it!
Silver-Haired-Thief chapter 11 . 7/4/2012
Update :)
randomscreamfest chapter 11 . 8/18/2011
awwwwww and sexy! work on the POV changes but other then that, it's a good story.
Guest chapter 11 . 7/26/2010
Ahhhhh I want an update soooon T.T where are you dear authoress of yaoi goodness?
iRapeZombies chapter 11 . 6/5/2010
You've got me hooked on this! :) I LOVE ZEMYX AND AKUROKU AND SORIKU333 :D Can't wait for more!
Miggery chapter 11 . 4/11/2010
Ahahah The dessert part made me hungry... ;P Great job, can't wait for the next chapter!
Liv chapter 11 . 2/15/2010
I love it! This is such an awesome story!
Rukeya chapter 11 . 2/14/2010
;-; Why is it that the epicly awesome stories of are never, never, updated in like..2 years? ;-; 'Tis a shame. TT

I LOVE THIS! X33 What a fantastically sexy story. ;D I'm hooked. Addicted. In Laahv. :3 Your writing is awesome, and your sense of humor is .. funny XD Update soon..though I know you won't ;-;
GABRIEL96 chapter 11 . 1/10/2010
i love it! D

this story is awesome! normally i don't find sora/riku that interesting but in this story it really is!

i also adore the scent you use for axel! it so suits him!

and the zemyx in this is just too awesome to describe (is HUGE zemyx fangirl)

thanks for writing such a good story!
TheMostPatheticNameEver chapter 11 . 11/14/2009
Geh. Roxas' attitude is just too much, in the beginning, that is. Later on I kinda like him. Not that his persona is awful, it really is good, but if I'd meet him in real life, I'd surely thing something in the line of "what a jerk."

I like how you write about all three couples every chapter, that way it isn't just about one, or two, but all of them.

I've been thinking, and no, it isn't the time to exclaim "have you? I was sure that you wasn't able to do that!" What exactly would happen if Demyx and Zexion were found out? I mean, they're still student and teacher.

Lovely story, I'm looking forward to the next update
emptyheadnothoughts chapter 11 . 10/21/2009
Can you please update this! I think it's one of the better written Kingdom Hearts FF. please update.
switchboxroxrox chapter 11 . 6/2/2009
Aw, I like this story so far! I see you haven't updated in a while, but please continue if you get the time and inspiration! I love it! 3
OnceUponALullaby chapter 11 . 5/25/2009
-gapes-

You went to Kawaii Kon?

Did you cosplay?

Heh. I went too - [Saw an Axel cosplayer holding a seme/uke paddle. Got a picture. Bought a mini knife-sword. It was so worth it.]

Did you see the swords they had there? There was this frikkin KEYBLADE that I so so so wanted to buy...

-is totally off topic-

Heh. I'm totally waiting for the Zemyx shmex. Gonna go read and find it now xD
Rainstar148 chapter 11 . 4/27/2009
omg o_o That is just sexy, fooling around in an empty classroom xD

Ah, I absolutely LOVE this story, I find it quite unique with Roxas being a homophobe, and Zexion being a teacher and whatnot.

But...what is THIS? There is NO CHAPTER 12! That's HORRIBLE! What am I gonna do? :O

Is there any chance you'll be updating this story? (it doesn't really look like it, since it looks like the last update was about 2 years ago...)

But really, I wish you'd update :)
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