I really shouldn’t be adding to the already large pile comments for a Really dead fic from 2009. It feels though, that this was more of a writing exercise than fiction. Long essays for chapters with very little plot. And more twists and turns for the sake of plot.
I wished I had skipped ahead instead of wasting my time.

Well can't say I enjoyed it.
The first ch. was already hard to take with the kuuby bitching and fucking with Naruto, also I don't know how she can just alter him so completely without the seal. Being broken. Sadly the wtoy progresse not to my liking, from the stupid desisions Naruto makes to him getting fuck over buy to many people.

Not bad story but not my cup of tea

Release the next chapter damnit

Great. Because one brooding uchiha wasn't enough

the angel and hell is stupid concept seriously, and well this is trash and i hope he'll be smart but nahhh i tell the whole world mysecret so praise me fack stupid naruto

more please. what happened to not abandoning the story? I'm quite thoroughly enjoying where this is going and I absolutely want to read more.

I really want to see more of this. I hope it isn't dead.

Kinda iffy on scene where kakashi walks naruto away from the others and pins him to the tree and yells at him. Naruto was doing Kakashi’s job, if anything it’s incompetence on Kakashi’s part. Sakura being a fan-girl and having no skills could get them all killed in a mission. Naruto was just the one willing to try and changer her attitude, rather than Kakashi who it should have been.

Shit fic.

This shit made me want to kill myself

Good story, I loved it from beginning to end, I hope it continues at some point ... bye

Ok wtf he should be pissed off that he was living VERY POORLY only to find out that his parents was rich or at least we'll off and that the old man has kept him from what was rightfully his in the first place instead he got a shitty apartment little food just so he would be thankful to the village for supporting him BS

"Well Developed 13 year old" Is a fucked sentence

Only the fem kyuubi is keeping me away from reading this. Sigh

Holy shit dude. You have a serious problem.

Have you ever clicked "CtrlF" on one of your chapters, and searched for "..."? You used "..." nearly 500 times in this chapter alone. You don't go two paragraphs without it, it's fucking ridiculous.

I seriously hope you got better at writing. Reading "..." dozens of pauses at every couple hundred words is absolutely obnoxious. It's hard to focus on the actual writing when you're spamming pauses at literally every single dialogue and in every other paragraph - even the narration has pauses, what the fuck?!

Hope you got your shit together.