You've written this a long time ago. So I dont know when you will see this but this was the most beautiful piece I have read. The only issue was the his and he's. I cried like a baby and then I was laughing until my sides hurt. The ins and outs the ups and the downs. The way you arranged and manipulated the story and its characters. The back stories. It was a true emotional roller coaster ride and my mind and heart are absolutely blown away. This was beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing this. You are blessed and I really really hope you keep writing. My email is please tell me the day you get published. I will be your biggest fan.

You dear are a mastermind. This story has officially blown my mind.

Wow. This is so wonderful.

I could’ve read wrong but let me get this straight. Natsume was dead when mikan found out she was pregnant. Then later she gave birth. It was said that it’s been six months since Natsume left them. In the span of sixth months she was pregnant and gave birth. But the kid can already talk!

That really was amazing. Thank you for creating such a wonderful story. Dang, I cried and giggled and laughed. All because of a fanfic. Your plot twists are ingenuous and amazing. I'm definitely reading your other works. XD

this is a shitty shit load. STOP CONFUSING US FOR GOODNESS SAKE FUCK YOU!

Awesome story. Though it became a bit irritating in between because of confusing twists. But it was still pretty interesting. Thank god it ended on happy note otherwise i would have killed you seriously

This story is golden! I couldn't be any happier :)

Sorry, I did not like it. In the beginning it was fine but is strayed off. This is a sequel. There should have been more sadness and more references to the past. The battle sounded way too medieval and it destroyed the original theme. Natsume died, got revived as Nathan, seems weird but I went a long with it. However, the battle ruined it. I was hoping that Natsume slowly regains his memories, and Mikan and him cry over all the years that have passed. The first story should have just been left alone by itself.

IS IT NATSUME?

Im dying over here

Please stop

You wrote and finished this story for several years and I must say you have a beautiful story.. I hope you can still read my review and some constructive criticisms in your story.

The Plot- your plot itself was very impressive, the twists were unexpected, the intensity of it was there. The breathtaking scenes of the final battle was intense. I like how you worded and described every details of your story.

Characters- you build their characters with so much emotions, it seems so real. I love How their personalities developed as your story unfolds.

There were inconsistency of your plot as your story unfolds, I hope in your future stories you have to maintain the consistency of it as you unfold because that is very important. Grammatical errors were there, wrong spellings were also present, though it can easily be corrected just make sure to lessen it because that were also great impact to your story.

Honestly along the way as I read your story I got confused, so I have to re read again to follow the flow especially when you put flashback and fillers as it progresses though as your story gets to its near ending you explain what happen and what was really going on so at least you clear everything. Also there are dates and years that I was confused as well. You also mix names so it add on to some confusion, please be careful on that as well.

I also commend you for long chapters, that's a very hard work.

Overall your story was great it was full of emotions from friendship, to romance, to angst, family issues, betrayal, hope, moving on, trust, hurt, comfort, forgiveness and most especially Love. Because despite all the pain, betrayal and revenge they went through, True Love was their greatest weapon they were able to overcome all those painful memories.

I'm also proud of you because you are Pinoy... Job well done.. Just continue writing and for sure you will be a great writer someday.

THAT WAS EPIC!

Probably the best GA fanfic I have ever read this was awesome please write another story. You are amazing . I am so glad Ryoichi didn't die I really thought he died. That was so cuteeee!
I wish this story never ended! I will Always support you. You are an awesome writer!

I don't know what to say.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
I can't believe it. HE CAN'T HAVE Died!
NATSUME COULDN'T EVEN SPEND MUCH TIME WITH HIM AS A FATHER! WHYYYYYYYYYYY?
RYOICHI DIDN'T DESERVE TO DIE!
FIRST IT WAS NINA NOW IT IS RYOICHI!
IT IS NOT FAIR!
Wait lady Yukini...Please please please pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease TELL ME SHE CAN SAVE HIM! DAMN THAT A****** HAJIMI! PLEASEEEEEE DON'T BE CRUEL ANF DON'T LET HIM DIE THIS STORY WAS AWESOMEEEE IT IS ONE OF MY FAVORITES YOU CANNOT LET IT END THIS WAY!
*GOES DROWNS IN TEARS*

my goodness.. this is ePic! Amazing! if this story be an anime or special movie..hundred percent with high rating! I've read so many stories here in fanfic, but this one is so unique, the plot was perfect, and i'd cried... im so impressed..gonna tell others for this stories.. thank u and hoe u will write more stories of gakuen alice !