This story is old so I don’t know why I am reviewing but that scene I the mirrors was ridiculous. Talking about bonds broken between Naruto and Sasuke, there was never a bond there. Then you have him super one min then getting slapped around the next.

This was a really good story. I liked the Winston Churchill quote bear he end. It really described the story.

I find it shit, his personality keeps changing even though he is "merged", he had a hard time with kiba yet he can take on Zabuza, his character and strength arent consistent, basically it feels like your making the fights difficult just to do it when it shouldn't be.

yes to sequel

Very impressive story! It was an enjoyable read from beginning to end! I noticed a few of the characters were a bit different. Mainly Sasuke and Sakura. Sakura was real annoying bitch in here! And that comments she made to Naruto about him dying, I thought to myself would someone please just smack this spoiled bitch already! Anyway. Great story man! A shame there won't be a sequel but oh well.

Arashi. I'm beginning to hate kishimoto for teasing that name, every ff written before Shippuden uses that name. And no one ever goes back and fixes things, making newcomers wonder who the hell Arashi is. Rant aside, decent start.

fuck u and die u had to fucking ruin the damn fucking story u son of a bitch u cunt go fucking he'll u son of a bitch i hope u fucking die of cancer u fucking cunt u ugly piece of shit

You know your story sucks the minute my two guy likes it

I really like the concept of Jiraiya taking Naruto with him to train him and keep him safe, but having a 7 year old already mastering 2 elemental jutsu, especially from 2 different elements, seems a little over powered. The average 12 year old is considered a prodigy if he can handle 1, as shown by Kakashi's surprise when Sasuke uses the Fireball jutsu.

that was good keep the chapters coming

that was good keep the chapters coming

Lol what a story...it totally sucks dude..u could have said its only features jokers in name of ninjas coz which kage will think of pranks and laugh when kyuubi is off destroying the village...what a joke...nooby writer

so i like your story but i am finding increasing inconsistencies. For example, you make naruto super powerful able to beat kakashi and zabuza fairly easily but then he faints after his match with kiba, something he didn't do even in the original, he also struggles against neji. So how can he be on par with jonin but struggle with genin. Also shika can't forfeit against gaara he already did against his sister

Why does everyone know minato namikaze, the fourth hokage... as ARASHI?!

Wtf? Naruto can beat kakashi like he's nothing, go toe to toe with jiraiya and surprisingly, he has that much difficulty fighting neji. I wonder what you were thinking when you wrote that fight scene.