Reviews for Walking the Line Between Life and Death |
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You're a loser chapter 1 . 3/23 Wow 4 chapters back to back with nothing interesting happening but love interest on her getting bang or banging her. She could of just juken him immovable and then juken the blood flow of his junk to be big and just rape him instead. |
Espionage chapter 4 . 3/23 I seen that coming in chap 4 but its so stupid. She should ran and thought about it afterward. She came went back to look for him and he is already gone without a trace. It would of be like a dream for her you know. She would be confused if its is or not a dream lol How he became closer with her made the story way to short. Try harder next time |
Elle4Life chapter 14 . 8/2/2019 This is one of the best stories I’ve read ever read srsly I was afraid that it would end on a cliffhanger |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/7/2018 Really fucking retarded |
Logan chapter 14 . 8/9/2017 Make more |
E.Richtofen chapter 14 . 6/21/2017 What a great ending, to a great story. Thanks you for completing it. |
E.Richtofen chapter 10 . 6/21/2017 You hit all the right spots for what I have been looking for in a fan fiction. Naruto Goes Rogue...Check Awesome NaruHina Moments...Check Powerful Naruto...Check Original Story...Check Seriously, great job. The humor, suspense, and just the overall plot is great. |
E.Richtofen chapter 6 . 6/21/2017 You really have a sense of humor, the scene with Tsunade and the pranks Naruto and Hinata did to each other, were hilarious. Hinata seemed a bit out of character, but I think with her age that you set and your explanation, made it feel okay or normal enough. I like how at least up until Ch.6, you haven't portrayed Naruto as a pervert like his mentor (maybe he will be more perverted later). While there is little action, there is quite a bit going on story wise, so I think that makes up for it. Awesome read so far. |
Guest chapter 14 . 5/6/2017 Loved it thank you |
Guest chapter 14 . 12/17/2016 maaaannnnnnnn this was awesome |
Guest chapter 5 . 4/8/2016 There are too mqny hinanaru fanfiction please change character they not skura those 2 are unoriginal |
katiewinchester87 chapter 8 . 3/14/2016 I died laughing in chapter but great story overall |
Silvereye-BW chapter 14 . 3/1/2016 Cool story. That Itan dude was a idiot. Poor boy never stood a chance. |
HitmaN007 chapter 14 . 2/7/2016 love it |
Sniperbeattie chapter 14 . 9/19/2015 I love it I love it I love it |