Hello! When do you think you are going to write a new chapter? I miss this story.

LOL, this is just about the only OC based story that i've thought was good. work more on the humor though, it's not as good as in the beggining.

Write more now i command you NOW!

Finally! I get to leave a comment on this story. This is one of the most bizzare and random fanfictions I have ever read. But you are popping out chapters so fast that you aren't giving enough time for reviewers. It's just one funny/sadly/actiony chapter after another! It's even faster than service in a Burger King resturaunt! 'Thou that's not saying much...

I love Chiso! She is the most hilarious original character I've ever read! And I've been reading a lot. How she is blind, stupid, and tormented all at the same time! Keep up the good work!

Dear god, they ate Tenten.

This story is awsome!

O_o Jiraiya's a redneck? Well, it's your story... though, imagining Jiraiya with a shotgun just isn't going right in my head...

Okay, Koreki is a fanfic writer? We're all doomed! Hehehe...

Why are the Hyuugas just surprised to see Chiso, instead of being shocked that she's alive? And just how old was Chiso when she got tossed into the river?

Okay, my brain hasn't exploded yet... write some more, please!

For someone whoclaims to not know much about Naruto, you sure do know a lot... or did you just research it on Wikipedia? Eh, it doesn't matter...

This fic is well written, even if the plot went out the window before you even typed the first letter. I'll wait for more chapters, even if it means my head'll explode trying to read them.

On a side note... I guess great minds think alike, because I also have a blind Hyuuga character (although the fic she's in is on an indefinitely long hiatus). Though, she isn't as clumsy as Chiso... but, Chiso makes a great humor gimmick!

Oh, yeah, thanks for the review!

Wow, this is...deffinatly a parody. But I love it!

“Tap, go home and bring Chiso with you.”

“I burnt down my house.”

HILARIOIS!

-Flower of the Desert