| Reviews for Hot |
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  Jackson chapter 1 . 10/22/2019 Great story, just a couple spelling mistakes but a good flow |
| blower chapter 1 . 6/10/2019 That was amazing |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/16/2019 I masturbate to this shit so hot |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/18/2019 So horny |
| Darkness Blitz chapter 1 . 4/24/2018 That was amazing I've looked at many of these but this on e is very detailed and just what you want in a sexual fan fiction. This was well made and props to the creator. My only complaints being that there were a few spelling errors but that's almost unavoidable so above all else, Good Job Creator! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/22/2018 That was really good! Plot goes well with the sex in my opinion, but most of the time stuff like this is just mindless sex with everyone having minimal personality. Good job! |
 desireejones99 chapter 1 . 8/1/2016 very sexy, and erotic |
| tacitblue1973 chapter 1 . 6/8/2016 How can he miss her birthday? It's in September after school starts? |
| missgsmith51 chapter 1 . 5/6/2016 Boy, if Ron only knew what was happening between the other two members of the trio, he'd be spitting nails ... or heading to Hermione's house with Ginny, both of them with wands a-blazing! Well, that's what they get for leaving the two of them alone all summer, eh? That reminds me ... Do you suppose they managed to give ol' Moldyshorts a big headache? I really do hope so! Cute story. |
| DylanL chapter 1 . 9/22/2014 I love this story but I wish it was longer |
| Bladre MKT chapter 1 . 9/15/2014 a rad of a rush right at the end, but quite fun and sweet, loved it. |
| Jazziet chapter 1 . 5/12/2014 Loved this. Hot and sweet. :) |
| imperator277 chapter 1 . 4/3/2014 Awesome story. Sequel? |
| Brunden chapter 1 . 12/30/2013 O...M...G that was some FUCKING KINKY SHIAT! |
| continental-line chapter 1 . 11/9/2013 Good story, nice detail. I like Harry and Hermione ships. (Personaly I think JKR was on cheap drugsa for books 6 & 7.) In the first five books Hermione always tried to do what she thought was best for Harry, even if Harry didn't think so. For the fangirl stalker, Ginny, to suddenly become the love of his life sounds like love potions at work. Hermione most likely LET herself get potioned by Ron only when she knew Harry could no longer be 'saved'. The Weasley mother, Molly, even hints at it in the books by telling Ginny and Hermione that she potioned Author and saw nothing wrong in 'kiddnapping' the man of her choice. Would she help her children? I think so. Forgive my little rant, you have a interesting story and its going on my Favorites. |
