This is brilliant, you're a great writer! ;)

Eeep! Amazing! i don't even know what to say...

Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!

great!

You should really write a sequel )

this story was so fantastic. i loved the way you wrote it and expressed emotion. im gonna go check if there's a sequel!

loved it! the way you write it! amazingly good!

one of my favourite mcfly stories on this site!

;trying again to review;

well, I finished reading this at 3am after reading for a couple of hours. I really love it, it had to be the brilliant mcfly fic i've ever read! I love the way you wrote the love scenes, it was truly an excellent writing and i learnt a lot about how writing. The way you wrote Harry was more than brilliant, you just made him rock :P more than the usual, that is.

it's great.

Tal

Oh wow, I've been reading this over the week and it's brilliant.

I loved it.

This story was amazing! YOU HAVE TO MAKE A SEQUEL! I loved it soo much. This is easily on of my favourite stories, and I wouldn't mind reading it over and over again!

Wow! That was amazing! Your story is so good and well written and filled with emotion, im at loss for words :D.

Its simply amazing!

Aww, I hope everything goes ok. I hope he doesn't yell... too much. So anyway, I like it a lot so far. Update soon soon soon!

x

shealtiel

Wow, i just finished the story and it is so good. I hope you havent stopped writing it, cause i cant wait to read more. :D

Your story is so good! I love the way you portrait (hm, i dont kow if thats even a word) them and their relationship and its very realistic and well written.

I like the fact that its so realistic. you can actually imagine their conversation taking place for real. :D

I really like your story so far! Its really well written and Im only on the second chapter, but I'll probably review after every one, which means you'll get a lot of them.

Hm, Im off to read the next chapter, but as i said, i really like it so far. :D

UPDATE ASAP I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY AND EVERYTHING ABOUT IT!