Ficou bom, escreva mais, abraços

Muito bom, espero que escreva mais, abraços

Well, its been some time since this was updated, but I still wanted to convey my thoughts,since I just read it for the first time! ;] I think this is VERY well written, you do a very good job conveying a female point of view in the venues you are taking the story thus far! Only real criticism would be minor typographical and sentence structuring. but NOT enough to truly harm your story! D

As far as Alucard being OOC? NO NEED to apologize. First of all, this is YOUR story, he can behave however you want him to! Secondly, NOONE can truly judge and know how he might truly react to prolonged companionship with Seras, or any other female, since the manga takes place in a fairly short amount of time. If we pay attention there are DEFINITE hints and insinuations of there being feelings hiding beneath the surface of his persona! Some beings choose, for a variety of reasons to hide or bury them! After all that Alucard had been through in love and humanity, its no wonder hes hiding/burying what he used to be and feel. So I say this story is excellent and BRAVO! I for one am very glad you shared it with us all! Thank you!

This story is really good, I can't point out any mistakes in it and I hope you can update soon.

wow, this is great, i love ur writing style plz update soon!

this is really good1 please update soon! although, you spell her name wrong, it's Seras, not Ceres...

I love it!

oh my i so love this story!

pleaze tell me that you are going to keep this story up!

i am a serasXalucard fan so really please reconsider!

*shakes joo to wake up*

vegi .~

Hahahahahaha! He saw her strange dream lol! I can't wait to see what happens next! Continue ASAP!

wonderful! keep up the good work!

I LOVE IT! I do hope you update soon, because I can tell you that this is amazing.

Can't stand to wait to know what he'll do now that he knows she thinks of him in that way. I love this couple so keep it up your great writer.

Maria

i think your take on the female perspective is very good! i love the story so far and cant wait till chapter three is up

I loved it! very wordy though i mean that in a good way, because with every extra unneeded word you pull me deeper and deeper into the world you've created. Plz update soon *_*

Woah! The story so far is really interesting! Hope to read more soon!