refreshing to see a fic on this pairing sans angst. the common ground of a sanctuary seems so fitting.

Okay so I admit, That was one of the best lemons I've ever read! Nice job!

That was amazing! I couldnt stop reading it. I had to force myself to blink. Hehe. I utterly loved it!

No matter how many times I read this, I always find this story to be one where I could read a million times and still experince it like it was the first time. Wonderfully written.

(-Mmm...gardens...~) (-Num, nums on pocky~)

'There's something about a freezing cold Marluxia which I have always loved being...' ~Mar

IV...no, Vexen, he-he really is always cold... ~Mar

Why say 'no' when as a nobody we lack morals also. ~Mar

(-That was really cute, I have always loved the fact of Marly being separated from the others by his garden. It is sad and fits him well. Vexen simply finding it by luck and curiosity, that is just how things go~ *Laughs slightly*-)

Beautiful. The smut would have been great without the fluff and the fluff would have been great without the smut. But together? Epic. I don't care about OOC. The damn pairing is OOC. But I have a story, not on here but on my deviantART account, called The Show Flower. This answers my question of how Marluxia and Vexen were before the events of my story... Though in my story... Marly's the mom ''

aw. that was cute. hehehehe...

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That was beautiful. Simply beautiful.

..."Stroking some blonde strands out of his face, admiring the view of pale, pale skin against the grass matching his frosty green eyes so well, blonde hair fanned and unusually messy, the ground underneath him slightly icy."

...I found that description quite pretty. :)

Anyway, cookies for you! :D

Oh wow, I absolutely loved this! The entire story leading up to and including the sex was sweet and beautiful, and the sex itself was wonderfully detailed and hot. And the ending left me with just the biggest smile on my face. Thank you!

(You get bonus points for having the small tussle over who was going to top)

That was an awesome fan-fic! I love it!

Please, keep writing

*Goes back to read it again*

-nosebleedorgasmfaint- O_O

ZOMG. This is possibly the BEST lemon on all of Fanfiction. You completely deserve yaoi muffins.

*slams a huge bow of yaoi muffins in front of her*

This is the greatest thing that has possibly ever happened on this site. I love you. I bow down to your greatness. *slams body on ground*

I love this. WRITE MORE or I shall curse you with sallow skin and weak cell phone reception! Lolz.

Mucho luff, -DinosaurKisses

MINDLESS SEX!

(Walks up) *Pats on shoulder* "Great job I really liked it, I really did you did a good job on it. I liked it alot" *Takes out fan starts to fan self* "Hmp! It was kind of hot too, yeah yaoi!"

Loving it!

So sweet!

*Transfixed* I loved it...beautiful...lemons and everything...*Hands author a huge cookie* Thank you for putting this up...