Reviews for Now It's My Turn |
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Ayla chapter 1 . 3/21 I love the writing in this, and how it's simple yet gets the message across really effectively. Well done! It's amazing! |
Lils chapter 1 . 2/15/2007 That was sweet. Very well written. Good job. The only part I thought was a little awkward was when Peter said Jason couldn't go to school that day. But since they go to a boarding school, they're kind of always at school. Maybe it could say class or something. I'm just trying to be helpful. Keep up the good work! |
hedwigmail chapter 1 . 2/15/2007 Aw! It was so cute... Just adorable... Sick Jason is just as adorable and Peter is all the time. And the soup feeding thing... Too cute. It's Meg, btw... ;) |