I like this one. New side of Kite for me... Never seen anyone who wrote him angsty.

Danse Macabre... hilarious.

_ . It was kind of confusing. But I understood your intentions and that was good. Poor Kite...

I think you did rather beautifuly on descibing what Kite may or may not have felt.

Excelent job, I look forward to whatever else you may write!

loved it, loved it, love it!

If her Hero felt this way about her, I almost can't blame Aura for erasing herself. Being depended by everyone, yet not being cared -about- by anyone, thus is the fate of a deity I guess, no one thinks about you when you do your job right.

Shugo actually met Aura BEFORE Kite did, she just gave him his character.

Heh. I agree that CC Corp's patch job seriously bastardized the original style of The World.

Still... "Are you going to delete me again?" Lyoris' data was reincarnated into Zeifie, I wonder if the AIDA is Aura trying to return to the world.

wow...i have to say thats really cool gives the reader a sort of insight to the transformation of kite to tri-edge, very creative please continue to write when you get the chance its really good a

A fascinating look into Kite's character. I look forward to more stories

Wow, this is definitely a different Kite, but it works pretty well. I liked the way you portrayed him, although of course, I imagine he's quite a few years older than he was in the series (he was too damn nice in the series). And I loved the little hint there with Kite and BlackRose. And I agre, that IS rather creepy, isn't it, for Shugo and Rena to have those avatars? *shudder* Anyway, please write more fics. :)

U want Kite's story to continue and I wamnt the GU teamm TOO! Pleadse continue!

Ooh~Very emotional read. I could see how all of these things would get onto Kite. Poor guy. :/ The style you used is really interesting, though some bits kind of confused me. But it was very well done. I wish Aura didn't have to leave. D: Her daughter was really cute, too. w

It is indeed an interesting one-shot with a darker and somewhat seeming like a twisted version of the once helpful and care-free Kite. I really like it.

Keep on writing! I'll be looking forward to them.

It's not half bad! Your depiction of this older Kite is quite interesting.

Just one correction: as stated by .hack/ZERO novel the one closest to Aura is Tsukasa. It says that Tsukasa is Aura's "core", that he is the one who put "feelings" into her.

I think that's the reason she appears before Tsukasa and Subaru in Unison, and it's clear only those two can see her up there.

...Well, you got guts for writing and posting this. Be careful of Aura's fans now. I am one, but I won't slaughter you for writing this.

Well... this fic is a little freaky. I don'T know how did that idea got in your head, but it was an interesting idea.

I hope to never see a fic like this again, but it was still an interesting idea that kept me intrigued.

So, it isn't bad at all... But I think I'm too shocked to say it was great either.

...Great. I'm confused now.