Oh my YES! Happy ending, a very beautiful happy ending T.T! Wow. This is fic is a masterpiece, and it's your first bleach fanfic? Then you must be a very talented genius, the characterization of Hitsugaya and every each other character, the relationship natures between each and Hitsu and the gradual events are all perfect! For me at least. The emotions and feels.. god this fic killed me many times but I still love it, and loved it even more with this incredible happy end :'D Seriously wow, I loved how you made it as.. ah, not sure how to describe it but, canon? Y'know.. that you revealed that Gin's true motives.. I thought he's the devil, but he really isn't ;.; Just like what it is in canon.. I hope you got what I'm trying to say!
Thank you for sharing such a fantastic story, I got so mesmerized with it that whenever I'm not reading it, I find myself thinking about it :D

good fic

I love your fics! This one has to be one of my favorite fanfics of Hitsugaya! Can't help but review after finding this fic again after reminiscing my bleach fandom days!:D

After forcing myself to pick up this fanfiction since it was literally everywhere I turned when browsing through Bleach fics, I was pleasantly surprised to find something that was actually really, really great! I kind of regret not picking it up earlier! Development was good and the story telling wasn't as dragged on as I thought it would be from a 106k story with a pretty simplistic set up. I couldn't help but recognize a few similarities that this had to the second Bleach movie and think that this story pulls it off so much better than the movie. Really, just great job!

Ah, resolution. Bonus points for maintaining the double-agent air of mystery around Gin.

I like how even though Ichigo isn't the main protagonist here, he's not completely out of the picture; he still shows up every once in a while, to the point of being a secondary main character. It gives this the feel of a side-story to the main plot of Bleach, like it's really connected. The Ichigo/Rukia fighting was funny, too.

I don't understand what you mean by "the sort [of hunger] that refuses to cease until everyone else has had their fill."?
Ichigo uses "-san" when talking to Rangiku. Hisagi, too, in case you have him and Ichigo interact in the remainder of this story. However, at least you finally got "Zaraki-taichou" right.

*holds up Hitsugaya* "Surprise!" LOL, that made my night!

Also, Urahara refers to Ichigo as "Kurosaki-san" and Isshin as "Isshin-san," and Histugaya refers to Rukia as "Kuchiki."

Because you seem to care about getting everyone's speech and mennerisms down correctly, I feel I should point out that Nel has a lisp. I don't know how often it's heard, but it consistently causes her to call Ichigo "Istygo."

It would be "Zaraki-taichou," not "Kenpachi-taichou." Calling him Kenpachi-taichou is like calling Hitsugaya "Toushiro-taichou." The only one who ever calls him Kenpachi is Ichigo, to my knowledge.

Wow. I absolutely loved this story. You had ne hooked from the beginnjng till the end. I totally love how you portrayed gin- on character, devious sly and a bit cruel too.. Loved Toshiro and rangiku. Amd momo's apology at the end. And everything else. .

this. was. AMAZING!
It was so well thought out and planed that i was practically lost in the story! All the characters where so in depth that they could almost be living people! I had tons of fun reading this story and I'm glad you took the time to write such a story. thanks for the great read

For some reason, all of the story thus far seems to be a metaphor for cancer.

Brilliant I love your writing style, it's detailed and at times has a reflective tone to it but neither gets ov the top and your action scenes are well done to.

Karin! one character i just can't stand!