Your story and the one at live journal were both excellent! Thank you both for the read!

Wow. Just wow. Really lovely. You really seem to understand the McKay character well. I cried-which is NOT something I normally do. Thank you. Really got me thinking.

Loved this!

Getting into Rodney's brain after the events of Trinity and other missions like it is an incredible journey to read in your capable hands. I feel his emotions vividly and sharply.

Thing I loved the most: Rodney's mind set when Lorne shows up to rescue him. "What are you doing here?"... Just heart-breaking to see how bleak Rodney sees his world and situation now.

Thanks for sharing this. Now it's off to read Wildcat's accompanying story. Thanks for sharing that link, as well!

Great story :)

Amazing story! Loved it

Awesomeness! It's really really good! I love it!

Hi Ya,

Fantastic. Really, really liked it. Loved the idea that he laid his soul bare but they take a vow of silence and an oath to heal his wounds. Ah bless him.

Love it.

M xx

Now, THIS was excellent - I loved the way the story was woven into explaining the psychological place McKay was coming from...

Wow. Excellent laying on of the angst.

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Just going back and reviewing your work I've previously read. I really like the perspective (though wrong as it was) on Rodney that he felt he deserved what he was getting. I always like it when an author gives Rodney that doubt in himself, that vulnerability, that helps him open up a little.

You really got me a little emotional with the prison angst there. There's some room for improvement though. You have a tendency to give a lot of exposition and just tell the reader what's happening, instead of letting the characters show us.

I could explain what I mean by that, but so many people can do it so much better, so go google, or start here:

Hope there's more of this, despite the 'the end'. :)

You know where there's little sentences and paragraphs that you *know* are gunna be boring so you skip? Well, there was none here, I was tranfixed. Well Done, Beautiful Fic

Fabric x

This was very touching and beautiful.

Poor Rodney, it felt like I was there with him. I'm glad Sheppard and Lorne were able to get him out and he experienced the care of his friends. Good work, well done.

Wow. I like it. Didn't find much in the way of grammar mistakes. Thank you for that. I can't say much but good job.