Funny! I loved it!

Wow. The talk of toilets makes me wonder wear people went to the bathroom. Never mind. I don't think I want to know.

Always hated Hax too.

This chapter reminded me of why I hate Screedius so much. He had so much pride, that it didn't bug him to kill hundreds of people. It's okay to have some pride, but it's not okay to have excessive amounts of pride. Didn't his momma ever tell him that to much pride is a sin?

I think most of his "talkativeness" is due to the lack a appearances.

I almost never laugh when I'm reading. I almost died of laughter. Vilnix has no idea what friendship is, does he.

This was hilarious! I always like it when people write parodies. Very funny.

LOL! I always thought Raffix was overly pompous as well! Good one, although I didn't exactly get the thing about the shower...

Briticisms, I like that word, Briticisms...

Nice fic, keep it up!

it's CRUMPETS not crimpets :-)

hilarious writing love it!

P.S only the very posh rich english who live in oxford act like that

ha wow this is hilarious I was just playing around on google and typed in the edge chronicles and this popped up and it is a work of a genius...

but if you need a person to interview daxiel xaxis would work

gahahahaha. Screed aint gay! Man, it sucked that he became Screed toe taker from the noble knight academic he was. Man. Cruel, cruel twist. *shakes head* Oh well, realistic though. I really cant imagine screedius and philius. Gross.

SCREEDIUS AINT GAY!

"bring out their biggest flaws and parade them for the whole world to see"

exactly. LOL, you actually counted the words he uttered? gahahaha, that was amazing. Much, much better than the first chappie. You could have humiliated Vilnix all the more. If it was me i'd have set a pack of whitecollar wolves and Goom and Hubble and Mumsie on him already. *Lightning flashes and clouds darken* BWAHAHAHAHAHA!

-cough-

Anyway, once again, awesome chappie! Im off to the next!

(Queue 18th century charging music)

gahahahah. Short but sweet. Im so happy i found this story. I typed in something in the search engine then a fanfic appeared under the category of The Edge Chronicles. I just had to open it up! This is my favorite book series. *laughs nervously* I hate vilnix. gr. gr... Great story, it rocks! Awesome idea. hehehe.,

TEC Rocks!

*Pinoy_rockstah*

ENGLISH stereotypes. You must not associate us with ze yucky syings like: "Jolly good" etc. Or mention ze haggis. Just to round this review off: "Jolly good show, old chap. Toodle-oo!"