This is really nice and short. Thanks for this. :)

Ooh my first Love Hina Fanfic, I'm excited to read a fanfic about this!

This was a great story. I always thought Keitaro and Mutsumi would make a great couple. Mutsumi is such a kind person and she would do wonders fora for Keitaro if they did get together unlike Naru. I never really liked Baru and I think Keitaro would be in an abusive relationship with her because of her violent personality. You did a great job writing this and I liked the character development. I really enjoyed reading this story so thank you for writing it.

Another really well written Fic!

I give this very high marks, ESPECIALLY as this is your FIRST Love Hina Fic!

All else I can say is "Wow".

Thank you for shareing your work. I quite enjoyed this story and contrary to your final note I think you ended this tale very well.

this was good

A wonderful story!

Trifle too much of Naru-bashing, but with fan-fiction, I can't seem to do anything about it.

I really wish you would have labelled this story with "Mutsumi" as a character. It would have made it easy to find. As things are, I accidentally stumbled across it on another author's favorites!

Thanks for the good story,

chronodekar

"Naru fans" ? I've been here on for quite some time searching for good Love Hina stories, and surprisingly, I haven't found a GOOD Naru story.

Sure, there are SOME, but I have yet to find anything GOOD.

-chronodekar

Naru fans...? I wonder if there are any at all.

Realy heart tuching story. I hope you got some idea for little bit longer Epilogue.

Like when Naru comes to say she is sory Mutsumi and Keitaro decites to invite her for weding something like that.

just wild idea dont flame me being on romantic side bit.

And i had great time reading this story. Great work.

So awesome!

reeally great job!

Here's a review from a man with too much time on his hands. Been bouncing around on YouTube and FanFiction all day. I have just finished reading this story, and I think it is very good. I, along with many of the other people who reviewed this work would love to see a continuation of this story wherein Naru is FINALLY able to make peace with her demons.

I will be looking forward to more of your upcoming work, so don't keep me and the rest of the reviewers waiting!

Tisk, Tisk, Tisk they had their chance and failed so they lose HA!

i like this one too! Mutsumi and Keitaro never really got me too much, (i definitely like kitsune better. i dont know why) but this is good. I love the way motoko is in this one. She definitely would have stopped naru had that really happened. shes a little...different in "A Friend In Need" but its all good i guess. i think her and Su should end up together. haha. :)

In my search for some good Keitaro\Mutsumi Stuff, I been passing this one up for some odd reason...

This is one damn fine fic as it is, although Naru's return could be made into a sequel.

Keep up the great work.

Duo