This was such an awesomely written story, and I love the plot!

Okay, this is probably one of the worst AU/future fics I have read about this pairing. Really Kaoru becoming an alocholic writer publisher?
You should have totally gotten Kaoru to have fled to japan to meet Hikaru
Meh, shame since I loved your last story
Maybe next time Mina-san

amazing! made me cry!

That was awesome

aww... that story i'm crying right now, damn you! lol, that means i luv-luved it...
it was so sad at first i just couldn't stop, because your summary had the luvly word 'hitachiincest' in it...i luved ur story right down to the core 0

I'd laugh if the old lady came in and caught them at the end! She's have a breakdown or something! Great story!

Damn. What a good story.

Well, Kaoru was OOC, but of course that was necessary for the plot. The thing is, I love how you made his OOCness make sense. Many authors write about the twins in different situations that make them act OOC, but both the personalities and plots never make sense...but yours does! Congratulations. :D

I have to say that I love the plot. I adore happy endings, so I loved the ending too. I feel all warm and fuzzy inside, so I think that you have succeeded as an author, in this story. :)

There were some rare grammar mistakes that I completely ignored because the story was too intriguing for me to care. I'd say that that's another wonderful accomplishment of an author.

Anyway, great job. I think I'm gonna go check out your author's profile now. XD

This is a beautifully sad and touching piece. It made me cry a little. I'm glad to have discovered an author like yourself. Thank you for the read.

...I swear the last time I read this, the ending was different. I -swear-. It had Kaoru calling up the guy whose story he rejected, and telling him that if he reworked the ending, Kaoru would publish the book.

God -damn- I must have a fantastic imagination. I swear it happened, though.

...Now I wonder what else I've read that I've fabricated endings for.

Ah, good story, etc etc etc. Of course it's good - I wouldn't have made up a whole damn ending for it and come back to read it again, if it sucked. Also, Mrs. Angeline amuses me.

-Elle.

oh wow so col

beautiful *sobs* Normally, I'm a fan of a cruel/sadistic/evil Kaoru... but this Kaoru.. just made me sad *sobbing from the awesome writing*

KAWII! i luv it...Kaoru is unrecognizable in the begining...but in the end he is the same Kaoru...and he and Hikaru are happy.

~Sayo-san

Oh and one more thing... Kaoru should've been the fashion designer and not Hikaru xP

I loved it. :) The begingging annoyed me very much, though... Kaoru would never be a cruel peson! It annoyed me so much that I almost stopped reading the whole fic. But I still read it. And I love this fic, but... I just can't see Kaoru as a person like that.

This is so good! :D

One thing- In two random sentences you switch to third person. But this piece is so beautiful!