You really need to change the intro of the chapter to tell people that you have done a rewrite and left this here.

Will there be a continuation please ?

Die Fry DIE! Grrr. This chapter had me so tense. I want to say more but the desire to go to the next chapter is too strong.

Go Shazza for actually remembering what she is told! And yes for Johns death. That is a bit of canon I am happy to see was followed through on.

Fry was so eager to dismiss Harry’s abilities and usefulness. It made the moment when Harry summoned his light all the sweeter. Also you brought up everyone breathing more easily later in the movie :) very pleased with that.

Why can't people just box their issues when there is an emergency and get done what needs doing? No, instead they are going to let jealousy cause problems. Fry and Johns really do deserve to die.

So I was all ready to be mad at Imam for keeping Ali away from Harry but then I realized he was just keeping him safe in the hold (and probably a bit keeping away from Riddick who was carrying Harry) and I calmed down. The calm didn’t last long though as I have no idea who is safe and who is not beyond I’m assuming Harry and Riddick. Canon Imam I don’t really care about but you made me care about this one. Then there are the kids. And I actually kind of like Paris but I’d take him dying over Shazza. It’s only Johns and Fry I want to see die. Josh my nerves! Then we lost poor Hassan and that just made me more nervous for anyone else.

Seeing Shazza comforting Jack and that you actually brought up her grief for Zeek was nice to see and helped to calm my nerves a bit. Than moments after learning Harry was a vampire and while seeing Harry and Riddick kiss she scolded Jack for her language hahaha that was brilliant. Especially with how much Jack was scolded in the movie.

YES! He saves Shazza! Second favorite character in the move still lives! (Riddick is first, Jack is third). Also I love how protective of little Ali Harry is. Hopefully the boy and his father won't be scared of Harry now and try to keep him away. Harry is his best shot.

Oh Harry. That's one of the worse things, when a new stress stirs up old pains. Hopefully the door is opening for Riddick to come comfort him and not someone else. He doesn't need Johns right now.

Dun dun dun! I won't lie. I'm getting anxious about who will live and who will die. I'm going to end up binging this whole fic and that was not the plan. Productivity for today has all but died in sacrifice to finding out what will happen.

Yes Harry! Save little Ali. The kids and Shazza were the ones I most wanted to live and while I’m so glad Jack did the deaths of the other 4 when I watch are still hard. So seeing little Ali saved means a lot.

Hurt/comfort, kink, and flyffy matey feels. This chapter had everything.

The movie tried really hard to redeem Fry. Other then when the ship is crashing we don’t really see that dark side. I love that you showed it here with wanting to send Harry into the hole. Given that fry is there only piolet Harry knows about it seems logical he’d take the risk in her place even if she deserves to be the one going in.

Well that was awesome. Two boogiemen freaking fry out and fascinating Jack. Well done.

Well… Things got kinky real fast didn’t they. Can’t say I was expecting it but dang if it wasn’t bloody brilliant.