boring

So great can't wait to read the next installment

Good follow-up to your first story. I like how you used the flowers to help express Ino’s emotions. Good thing it wasn’t her dad watching Ino instead of her mother. Naruto’s head is messed up enough with Kyuubi in it without an overprotective Inoichi hopping on in and scrambling it up. Then again he never did that with the Uchiha prick…oh well.

The best InoNaru pairing story I have had the pleasure of reading. I suppose the reactions would be quite humorous if word of the two dating got out(especially Inoichi, a father torn between rage and shock is always your the boy, then its you may as well be going to the undertaker)

loved the story especially the part were he almost kills the and by the way orange blossom symbolizes innocence, chastity, eternal love, marriage, and fruitfulness

Hi, I like this story. you're good. Keep it up. Also, I went to wikipedia to find the meaning of the orange blossom but they didn't have it listed, what does it mean.

I know this is a late review for this story, but I was rereading the stories on my favorites list and this story is beyond great. I love the way your wrote it, and the title fits perfect. I didn't realize it the first time I read it, but there aren't actually any spoken words in the story ay all. I've had 'Initial Offensive' on alert for a while, and I can't wait for more from it. This story is an Art of Unspoken Words, hat's off to you.

very cool )

I loved it. Absolutly loved this fic. Keep up the great work.

Yes, it would be interesting to see how Ino and Inoichi react to Naruto giving Ino Orange Blossoms. Eternal love, marriage, and fertility (we were taught fruitfulness, but we all know what that really means); heaps and heaps of fun to be had watching that spectacle. You could probably sell tickets.

Hehe! High marks for humor again:) Particularly on Ino's internal punctuation ;) Hmm. I'm not sure if I agree with your assessment of her kunoichi kapabilities, but that's a pretty subjective thing: I think we've only ever seen her fight...what, three times? in the entire 366 issues released to this point, and 2/3 of them were in Ino-Shika-Cho situations.

Wow. Vivid job illustrating the disaster that the fancy-dinner-date became. I have one negative criticism on that, though...I very much doubt that a) Naruto would have any difficulty at all in killing or seriously maiming the waiter (if he wanted to-I can, however, see him not wanting to), and b), a bigger complaint...five cooks and waiters shouldn't be able to drag him anywhere he didn't want to go. I mean, he's sort of the equivalent of a Navy SEAL or a Marine Force Recon, in terms of fightin' skills, and in the prime of his life. Just an observation, not a, "Naruto ain't teh awesomesauce enough!" whine.

Hehe, poor Ino. Poor Naruto! I somehow doubt he has ANY knowledge of flower arrangement, unless it came from a teacher. Certainly nothing he'd willingly learn or endure being taught voluntarily!

That is so cute! ::hands you internet cookies:: ;)

aw. the tone of the story is great, but too bad it's such a sad fic. ( still a good story though.

Nice a sequel, good read

A good follow-up to a really good one-shot. I enjoy your work and you should give yourself some credit and not be so critical of yourself. Well I'm going to sleep now but when I wake up I'm gonna read the semi-sequal and the real sequal to this awsome series. Late