This sounds interesting. You should finish it!

From Arty

OMFG. Wow...I don't know what to say...except ah! I love it! Please keep writing! Oh but there are some spelling and grammatical errors. I would love it if you would check those out and fix them! Thanks and keep writing!

hey this story is really well written. I hope you update soon and come up with a summary, because if you do i'm posotive that many people would read and review this. But it great and im happy that I took a look at it. I hope you update soon!