Reviews for Second Time
Primus2021 chapter 3 . 12/15/2015
my thoughts on the captains ... ...

01: Ichigo.
02: Karin.
03: Nel.
04: Orihime.
05: Yuzu.
06: Rukia.
07: Tatsuki.
08: Mizuiro.
09: Chad.
10: Ganju.
11: Renji.
12: Uryu.
13: Keigo.
Monk Gyatso chapter 3 . 11/9/2010
congratulations Yamada-san. You finally made lieutenant!
Aftonen chapter 3 . 1/11/2010
Grimmjow was/is the sexta espada for sixth not six, which is seis.
Tango Dancer chapter 9 . 11/15/2009
That's a pity you decided to stop this story! It really is one of the best ones I ever read! I hope you'll update soon the second chapter of the revised edition! Pleae, update soon, this is AWESOME!
Space Odin chapter 6 . 7/6/2009
no do not make this a crossover, if that is what you were getting at. otherwise whatever. also i loved Kisuke's Bankai.
Space Odin chapter 4 . 7/6/2009
awesome chapter!
Space Odin chapter 3 . 7/6/2009
i am definitely reading! this chapter was awesome.
Space Odin chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
awesome chapter. Awesome story too.
R2-Darth2 chapter 9 . 6/14/2009
Hope you continue redoing this story, no offence but Ichigo's powers really sucked. They didn't even feel like Zangetsu's powers or powers that anyone would do with a sword in hand actually. Spinning around your body while you have a chain on your sword that's meant specifically for that purpose? wtf? Flying tiger, hidden dragon stuff was really out of place too...
speaker4thesilent chapter 3 . 5/25/2009
Not a bad story thus far, but Ulquiorra was massively OOC here. He's got this whole 'calm and serene in the face of death thing' going on that he didn't have here, though you're right that his Segunda Etapa is pretty godlike :)

M'kay back to reading now.
Grimm chapter 9 . 1/12/2009
I prefer this version rather than the ssecond one you have started. I feel thatt it would be better if you continued this one.
stewart92 chapter 8 . 12/26/2007
great story
Raven the Ravenous chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
Now this is interesting. The fic hasn't even started as this seemed more like a prologue but I really like the first chapter. Your writing's really good, I quite sure I'll enjoy myself with this fic.
chocolaterini17 chapter 8 . 12/4/2007
OMG I NEVER THOUGHT THIS STORY WOULD EVER CONTINUE ...WOW I HOPE U POST A NEW CHAPTER SOON I LOVE WHERE THIS IS GOING!
titania eli chapter 6 . 11/27/2007
hey, i love your story.

what happen after that?

pls hurry update!

i have been waiting for your chapter 9 to come out so long
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