Reviews for The Tryouts
SaintNicholas119 chapter 17 . 5/21/2009
Please don't discontinue this story, I really like it. The fights are very good and the characters are portrayed very well. Update soon!
0 chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
Have you ever wondered why Fanfiction Bureau of Intelligence never fought against Flames Rising? Now I will tell you the reason. Some people have realised that avatarjk137 and Flames Rising seem to be good friends together.

This is only half of the truth!

Avatarjk137 IS Flames Rising.

Yes, our enemy has lived among us all this time. Now is our change to destroy him once and for all. Flame him with all you have got. Let him know what it feels to have your fics mercilessly flamed. Burn him, burn his account!

Join the fight against the Devil!
flamesmaster chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
You are a terrible writer and your lack of respect towards the canon sickens me. You don't deserve anything but flames and spam.

Please delete this fic.
super smasher chapter 16 . 6/21/2008
hey dude i got a idea have a fight between crackeletta from super star saga and pokemon trainer. eh, eh what do u think please right back
super smasher chapter 13 . 6/21/2008
hey dude marth is in the game you know
The Unkown One chapter 17 . 5/25/2008
Since the entire roster has been revealed now and all well still have the fights after the Snake and Krystal fight how about Mr. Game and Watch vs. Geno on Flat Zone 2 Pit vs. Sphinx on Skyworld. Pikachu and Crash should face off in PictoChat and Ice Climbers vs. Banjo on The Summit and Mario hope he wins with his jumping plus combos Fluud and forward smash and best attack called Firebrand he will give his opponent a good fight and boy i better stop LOL. Anyway Mario could face someone like Sora or Cloud maybe on the Mushroomy Kingdom.
The Unkown One chapter 17 . 5/24/2008
Not bad hope you keep going.
The Earth Alchemist chapter 17 . 4/21/2008
I hope you continue. this story is cool and funny
The Earth Alchemist chapter 16 . 4/20/2008
I think Snake should fight MC cause their both soliders
gamecrazy345 chapter 17 . 4/10/2008
I luv this storyline! Good fights, lots of fun, and it features alot of the characters that I wanted in Brawl! Great Job! Please don't stop making this fic, it's a really great idea. To improve your writing on this, you should try shortening the fights a little bit, the fights are good and epic, but sometimes it's just hard to read a daunting block of text, but other than that it's fine, good humor, good story, interesting characters, Good job!
kinger810 chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
Oh my god! Pichu! What the hell is wrong with you? But still... good chapter.
Specter24 chapter 17 . 3/11/2008
Good to see this story again. Sorry it took me so long to review, I was a bit busy playing Brawl, and updating my fic. So you are hosting a tournament, huh? Hmm... dont know if I should join. I'll think about it. Good chapter, by the way.
SirPain chapter 17 . 3/11/2008
Cool! You're back! I'm glad Faust got a chance to shine. He is pretty unpopular... This story is probably not gonna shine again. Oh well. GREAT chapter!
Odyssey's Burner chapter 17 . 3/11/2008
Very good and I've missed this Avatat!
Paper Dimentio chapter 17 . 3/11/2008
This story is back? Cool, I had nearly forgotten about it.

Good chapter, never heard of this Sol guy before, perhaps I'll check this game out...
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