Reviews for The Prom |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this is so ridiculous but it works |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was so cute and funny Great write Kudos! Blade |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! They got together! It was a little cheesy in parts, a little confusing in others. Overall, the biggest question I was left with was *home* exactly they had manipulated Cloud into falling in love with Leon. Anyways, 'twas interesting. Ja. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that is just sweet. I really enjoyed it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() “Damn,” he muttered under his breath. “Where did Monday and Tuesday go off to?” he asked himself. “Well, Lord Arthur had defeated both them and also Wednesday through Friday,” Sora explained." As in the Garth Nix books? Like "Mister Monday" or Grim Tuesday" or somethin'? |
![]() ![]() ![]() i liked this story. it was funny. the ending was more like funny than corny to me if that'll make you feel better about it |
![]() ![]() It is me or in chapter five, you have Cloud written as Leon when he was still in his house? (O_O)? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bravo! T-T It was just so cute! I'm adding it to my Favorites list and you can't stop me! -Yuki-chan out! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I Luvs it! Can't wait till next chappy! -YUKI-CHAN OUT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wait...Cloud woke...had breakfast...went to sleep...woke up at 5 and was done in a matter of minutes? that is totally not fair! i'll have to wake up and stay awake...like two hours for my hair and then make up and then...agh! anyways! Leon! i love you! he can cook! so wish he was straight...and real...but oh well...Cloud...dirty...it is always the innocent looking...seriously! anywyas! luv ya! ta~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wanna know what happens! Please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait for the prom! (never thought i would hear that come out of my mouth!)I am loving the story, desperately waiting to see how you are going to torture CLoud. hehe. Keep up the good writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yes! Cloud feeling a bit jealous! wonderful! i love Sephiroth and Leon! they are hilarious! Leon can cook, that i can totally believe...umm, who is leon's date? i can't wait to find out! anyways, Prom! its on may 5th _ anyays! luv this! ta! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like the story Can't wait till the next chap, Baii |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's extremly entertaining so far! Can't wait for more. |