Wonderfully written. It's so sweet!

I loved this story. It's so well written, it has a great stroyline too. I you write more! :)

So adorable! ~

Sweet ttm :)

There’s something about the way you write that has a very poetic feel to it, it’s unique. Like the way you said Cloud was “taking a few seconds to locate her face in the dark and a few more to enjoy it in the secrecy of the shadows”, I love that. It makes the story flow along nicely, and it’s much more enjoyable to read than just having your point spelled out plainly. I also really liked those few lines that you repeated at the end, because that was a really neat way to wrap up the story. Once again, very nicely done. I haven’t found many authors who write Cloud and Tifa in a way that I really adore, so it’s refreshing to be able to read all of these and completely fall in love with each one. :) I’ve been making sure to add each of them to my C2 community as I read them too, because they certainly deserve more attention. ;)

A sweet, sweet love story spoken with what they do for each other instead of what they say...and tho it is as chaste as can be, it ripples with every emotion that I want them to experience with each other-if not now, then very soon...you write with magic and I love it. thx mc

excellent way to catch the way they look after each other. And I liked Cloud's 'she was his' responsibility thoughts. A very sweet, gentle and yet deep and rich fic. Very enjoyable to read.

Really well written and characterised Cloti. Good job!

aw! that was cute!

Aww... thats a sweet ending. P

I loved the way you ended eet! ]! xD

*gives cookehs*

I like this story. It's very sweet and detailed.

Aw... how cute and sweet... Those two are simply adorable.. Cloud and Tifa are so cute together.. Well done! _

"He shifted then, turning in his chair, and let the faintest hint of a smile curve his lips, waiting for Tifa to speak and hoping that she wouldn’t because he really didn’t need the distraction when he was putting all his focus and concentration into just memorizing her as she was at that exact moment."

This, among other golden little one liners, really helped lift this fic to the high standing it deserves. I really enjoy your CloTi fics - they're soft and familiar and so very...CloTi.

beautiful. simple gesture,but you made it so sweet and heartwarming. i love it! x)

love it :)