Really enjoyed this short piece. The premise was believable and rife with emotion, without having to explicitly say it. Well done!

So sad! This is why im not an InuXkag fan! Although im not an KagXKou fan (Im a Bankostu and kagome fan) i read these alot and this is really good! Nice job!

she should have stayed damn it!

That is quite possibly the best less-than-10 one-shot I've ever read. Very nicely done!

A few minor "gramaticals" but otherwise, a very nice tale

This fricking story is very ficky. I don't understand a fricking thing of the fricking story. good luck on the next one. bye

loved the story realy! althought I allways say that tjis time I realy realy mean it ... if you ever do a sequel I'll be sure to read and review! SO PLEASE PPLLEEAASE DO A SEQUEL!

That was great, I enjoyed it thouroughly. Poor Kouga. Excellent writing.

WOW!

Interesting. I don't know what to think about it thought... *scrunches up face thoughtfully*

Nice story, can I liknk to it?

That was very good. I enjoyed it.

Very nicely exectuted, great ending, the whole shabang. Brilliant.