I love a lot your story !But i find that you show draco like a powerful people . I'll wonder why Augustus and Abraxas malfoy has shiwming one interest for harry .

Abrahas malfoy gave the blessing perhaps because he thinks harry can save draco , NO?

No offense to you, but I've just finish reading your Raven's story at this moment and I don't see DMHP. Heck, I know you said it was pre-DMHP in your previous story, but I don't see much of the romance here.

I like the Gryffindor trio scenes as well. They bring a touch of light to an otherwise dark, intense intriguing story.

this is so good. I like what you are doing with this story taking it so far and making sure that everything fits together. I like how you made the interaction of Harry and Draco. Please update soon and good job again.

Azalea

Wow... This chapter was excellent as were all the others. I liked the ending, how it took a dark turn while Draco and Harry were finally opening up, even just a little, to eachother. I await your next chapter!

A bit of constructive criticism, if I may.

Your vocabulary is excellent, but you overuse it. Every sentence is overly descriptive, to the point of becoming tiring. You also excessively overuse analogies. I understand if this is your writing style, but the best way to write is simply to write the way you think. I like the story, but it can be a little bit much.

Oh, so... so deep, so rich, so intense! A very unique piece of art, really. It has so many layers I don't think I will ever get to the bottom of this story :D Your writing is almost hypnotizing, very intriguing. Good work, all in all!

T.T I wish there was another 'next'button for me to press... Hope you post another chapter soon D.

The second review today!

I hope you'll forgive my lateness but it is difficult for me to review your work. Everything about it is so complex and involves so much effort that I feel it is my duty to put effort (not complexity I am incapable of that) into any reviews I give you.

I feel as though the climax is approaching, maybe it's already here.

I need to know what is happening between Malfoy and Harry, I know Draco is possessed and somehow Harry also fits into this equation. Beyond that everything else is up for speculation.

I'll wait till your next update.

Keep writing.

So, it was Voldemort, or someone on his orders, who was copying the Guillotine and beheading the people outside of Hogwarts, and the blood and mask in the Soth Wing were Draco's, or should I say Grindelwald's response of denial? I had already thought the blood on the South Wing with the Death Eater mask could be Dumbledore's... but then there's also Beddoes dead fellow Death Eaters, and who killed them. Were they trying to breach the Ministry, or Hogwarts? If there were Death Eaters trying to enter the Hogwarts castle, and they failed, because Draco supposedly interfered, were they trying to kil Dumbledore? Was that Snape's mission that Draco interfered with? Mhm... And Voldemort killed Abraxas Malfoy, using the poison created by Snape? Was Voldemort attempting to poison Draco as well? We still must find out whatever Lucius did to Draco with a dagger when he was younger to induce feelings of revenge.

Nvere mind, I'm trying to put my thoughts in order here, I read this story and the prequel a while ago and had forgotten most of the key plot twists. Anyway, I like the story, but all this mistery is getting overwhelming, I hope we learn the truth of all this soon. Looking forward to your next update!

once again you've broughten us a wonderfully written chapter that is beatiful. I love reading your stories because its like I'm reading a wonderful piece of literature while looking at it's painting. I simply cannot put it in words! Its sublime! I cannot wait until you update next!

Once again, a beautifully written, remarkably composed work of art! I am constantly amazed at your literature and lilted descriptions! 'Awesome' would be the terribly illiterate way to describe your writing, but, alas, my language skills constrain me!

please please PLEASE update soon! i beg of you! )

I'm afraid I'm a horrible fan of your work, leaving you hanging so long for my review. The plot continues to thicken and I think the climax is near. I could be wrong about that. What is Draco's plan, and how is Harry involved? I can't wait for the pieces to come together. This was another wonderful and intricate chapter. Keep Writing.

wonderful chapter as always! but icant help but to wonder if Draco and Harry are going to get together? There seems to be tension between the two especially in the ending where Harry is feeling Draco's neck.

I love Edgar Alan Poe. I live almost in Scotland and all those sceneries are getting alive in my head haha. The story is great.