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shelwyn chapter 10 . 9/4/2018 Ahh you told us your age at the end of the fic lol. Hey I enjoyed your story a lot! They were always my ship and to see them happy like this at my age of 25 is quite strange and fulfilling hahah |
shelwyn chapter 9 . 9/4/2018 Atoli is studying ;) |
shelwyn chapter 8 . 9/4/2018 Ah some more fluff would have been nice.. |
shelwyn chapter 7 . 9/4/2018 Little bit of drama okay okay |
shelwyn chapter 6 . 9/4/2018 Flame on! Go! Fire! Burning! |
shelwyn chapter 5 . 9/4/2018 Ah no home work? |
shelwyn chapter 4 . 9/4/2018 Lol forum exploding with rumors and complaints hahah |
shelwyn chapter 3 . 9/4/2018 Nice nice good chapter |
shelwyn chapter 2 . 9/4/2018 Wow hard core gamers |
shelwyn chapter 1 . 9/4/2018 I'm happy for them. They were always my favorite ship. |
Akoolpoptart chapter 3 . 10/21/2016 Review of Chapter 3 Like it so far, reminds me a lot of some of my experiences in Destiny. But I kinda would have liked there to be a little more interaction outside of the game. For instance, a scene of them having dinner and planning out what their next move, or swapping stories of things that happened during their game, or even discussing their classes, I mean Kite even said that Akira needed to hit the books more often in the last chapter. Just my thoughts |
JordanCruz93 chapter 10 . 1/23/2015 Good read |
UFDF Naruto chapter 10 . 5/26/2014 Hello, i don't know if you still log in as i have not seen any activity since 2012 and i don't know if you still read the reviews for your old stories but it is not often that i read stories that i feel like reviewing First i want to say that i am a huge .hack fan, i own all 7 games and have seen all of the Anime. Your story telling skills are amazing, i felt that the personality you gave Kite and Blackrose were spot on, most of the story is great and believable and i loved the Epilogue My only complain would be how you made them win the last battle, they basically cheated, something that i feel kite would NEVER do, its just not in his character to cheat, the only reason he ever used the bracelet was because he HAD too , never for personal gains such as how he used it to win the tournament My only other complaint was how you underused Haseo, yes i completely understand that this was a story focused around Kite and Blackrose but there was so much more that you could have done with in during the fights other then shoot bullets and be the team healer There is also how Endrence was so out of character but since this story was made before you played GU 2 and 3 I can overlook it :P That being said I still loved this story and will be looking at other stories in your list, if any of them are as well written as this one, I will not be disappointed :) Again I don't know if you still read these or care, but I felt that this story deserved it :) |
Taeniaea chapter 10 . 3/18/2012 cool story |
pika995 chapter 10 . 7/8/2009 OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG I LUVSH THIS STORY SO MUCH. I have the game .hack/infection and im at the part where kite and blackRose have t0 fight skeith part 1. omg the game is so cool |