So lovely I reread it ️️

As a note for your descriptions at the top, what happens in this chapter is not BDSM in the slightest, as there is no mutual consent to it. It is non-con, and should be noted as such.

That's not BDSM-ish, the number one rule in that lifestyle is mutual is straight up abuse. Hook is nothing more than an abusive ass-hole and fact that she is trying to rationalize his abuse and blames herself for it when she hasn't done anything to be be treated like this is really disturbing to say the least.

I loved this story so much, it's so difficult to find a fan fiction that properly captures the relationship between hook and Wendy. But you lost me with the ending, the relationship was clearly unhealthy, Wendy should have left not embraced it. Her reaction to finding out hook is a serial killer (he kills children no less) is way way to casual! Good job but work on decorating healthy relationships between characters and proper emotional responses.

I must admit the beginning of the story had me worried. The strain on their relationship was a little too much for me to handle. I almost quit halfway, but as an amateur writer I decided to give the story a chance, I really am glad I did. Is it a very nice job. Everything together at the very end.

well damn... I nearly cried several times... this was beautiful...

Awesome! I loved it! Well done, well written, and thanks for writing such an amazing story!

brilliant story!

Very beautiful story. Made me laugh and smile and just bask in cuteness and surprise. Thank you. You are a talented writer! I love the wit you put in this! I enjoyed all the way through, wish it was longer even!

I loved it. I like how you twisted the story of PAN an well. Beautifully done. Great Story!

I love this! Your ending was amazing, please keep on writing!

OH DAMN how did I miss THIS? There are never enough Wendy/Hook fics (mature ones) to satisfy my thirst!

I love it...it fascinated me from the very start..and for no apparent reason..the end brought tears to my eyes...

and thats just that...

I couldnt imagine NOT having read this..Id actually hurt myself if I didnt read this..its awesome (awesome being the highest praise I give..favorite word as it is)

and yeah /

This was great I loved it compleatly!

I absolutely loved your ending.