nice

i like the idea but luke is way too mature. what three year old speaks perfectly, gets into fist fights, and knows about prostitutes?

Beautiful-sniff, just beautiful

Heh, good thing that Luke met Katrina or he wouldn't have thought to assassinate the Emperor on the Death Star. Unbelievable that he eventually was for the destruction of Alderaan but I guess it will be a powerful statement. I liked the incident with Tarkin's trousers! XD

Even if it could need a bit touching up it was a good fast paced adventure.

i don't like the Dark LUKE! but i do love the story!

i was curious why you put all of the chapters on the one page, i loved the story it was great but i didn't like the luke/jade pairing, she was really stuck up :) i hope you write a sequal! it would be really kl!

You contradict yourself many times, first Luke is four, and is obviously raised on a desert planet, then he is little more than three and has been raised in the imperial center, meaning he isn't abviouslt from a desert world. Than Vader doesn't hate children, he finds him amusing, than in a later paragraph he doesn't like children!

I couldn't really read any more, as you keep changing these things. Please fix it.

Intresting

Fantastic story! Pass my compliments along to your friend. If I may be so bold as to venture a suggestion, however, it would be a better idea to split this into chapters. Think about it; this story is the size of a small epic! From the outside it looks like a one-shot or an abandoned fic, but inside it's huge. It would probaly get more of the attention it deserves if people understood how long it is, and how much time was clearly spent on it.

THIS STORY TOOK ME SO MANY HOURS TO READ! But it is soo good, i totally luved it! ) I can't believe it came to an end, have to check out ur other fiction story but i put u as my fave author and story list! I really did enjoy it, ur such a great writer!

I swear, this could actually be a movie! Great mind work! Mhm, had all the characters in place...just, gives me the goosebumps!

Luv it a 10x more! Bye

FANTASTIC!

Very good read, despite a few inconsistences with Luke's age at the very beggining and a small one with Leia at the end, I truly enjoyed reading through it.
It's above the average of the stories you find here and I'm glad I took the time to read it. Thank you for posting it here.

I'm only at about a quarter into the story, but I'm liking what I'm seeing.
The only thing is that the author, your friend, seems to be a little bit inconsistent with Luke's age as a little kid. Sometimes he's four, and at the beggining, he is stated to be three, but the memories described and the time period stated on Luke's memories doesn't fit very well with his age.
But other than that, I am really enjoying this story.

You're story had a most wonderful plot line that kept me reading until the end. Brava! But I absoultly hated the way the story ended. Boo! No offense, but heros like luke and leia, should always end the way Lucas envisioned for a fanfic to be truly respected. But all the same, you are a great writer, regardless of the star wars honor system. Please, write a sequeal, and make luke good. I would love reading it! Brava, once again!,
Piper Devini

You're story had a most wonderful plot line that kept me reading until the end. Brava! But I absoultly hated the way the story ended. Boo! No offense, but heros like luke and leia, should always end the way Lucas envisioned for a fanfic to be truly respected. But all the same, you are a great writer, regardless of the star wars honor system. Please, write a sequeal, and make luke good. I would love reading it! Brava, once again!,
Piper Devini