Oooh intriguing first chapter!

so heart breaking! loved it!

This made my day. Thank you for writing and posting this amazing love story! :-D

I loved this story so much. It was beautifully written, and very romantic. I even shed a tear when Ise was having a hard time coming to terms with her emotions. They were both written well- you kept everyone very much in character. I applaud you for this story, never a dull moment.

Eating Orihime's cooking might will be an interesting challenge. This chapter left me ready for the romance only to have hoped dashed. I love it though as the story would end with no tension. Great work. Can't wait to see your next threat.

Love Yumichika so please do! Nice building of tension and using Matsumoto to do so. I can just imagine my best friend and I tripping each other just to mess with the other.

I would not want Yachiru glued to my shoulders, candy is hard to get out of hair. Plus I can just imagine the battles she would get us into!

Your story so far is really great and flows well. You've remembered the tiny details which help set up the plot of the story. I am glad that I am reading this when you've completed it as I would have been begging you to write and release faster so far.

I reviewed but can I have Byakuya? XD And Rukia! I want the 2 of them to spend some "quality time' in a locked room.
*Elsewhere*
Both Rukia and Byakuya sneezed. XD!

Hahahahaha! You know, there was a point where I was crying like a baby. Thank you so much for letting me cry, and for writing this.

I feel as though this story would be more romance/drama then humor. It does have it's comedic moments but having the slight breakdowns from Nanao, her leaving the eighth, and all those other hard moments, I feel like it would be more dramatic.

What I didn't expect was this whole thing to be a plan between Jyu, Rangiku and Okuni. Sneaky little vixen Okuni is. I didn't even consider her to be behind it all. She's a good actress I can give her that.

I do like the build leading up into the relationship. I'm just getting into this pairing and don't find a lot of stories like this. Heck there aren't a lot of stories of this pairing period. But I'm glad I found this one. Into the favourite pile it goes!

Great job! xx
-Sapphire

Wow, you're a great author!

nanao sex time. and literally enough of review or ill do this and that/ thats threatening for thin air

ise ise ise. and don kannoji is dead *points to his mangled body* and dont know

oh nanao give in! *runs away from beauty queen*

i love this story so far and what?