... I cried.. I never cry reading fanfics... I cried... ugh.. this is so freaking beautiful..

Oh god... I love this story... It actually made me sad, nothing makes me sad after all the angst I read, yet you still managed... I hate one shots, finding them too short for my liking, but I love this, despite the fact that I'd like to see more, but I'm not sure where you could go with it, I just like having something to look forward to...

I am baking you e-cookies, with lots of chips!

~Vithian

So sad and beautiful. Made me cry. Thank you so much for this wonderful story.

this was a great poem! it brought tears to my eyes, but i loved the tomato line at the end. kudos to you for such a great story.

Wow. Absolutely beautiful. Just the right amount of depressing angst and drama, while still being cute in the end.

Aww... that was really, really sad and depressing, but also very well-written. I loved the repetition.

That was really emotional story, I felt so sorry for the Janitor, the simplicity of his affection was heartbreaking, and Elliot's narration was so poetic, almost as if its a lament she wrote for them.

That was really depressing but very beautiful.

Damn you! I'm starting to cry now. I hope you're happy! You've just successfully broken my heart into little tiny pieces. :( Frowny face frowns at you! Although... I must grudgingly admit the artistic merits of your story... Kudos.

Aw, my heart is broken...

Beautiful story!

kk the Janitor commited Suicied b/c JD died...so who did JD and the Janitor love?

I don't like elliot but this brought tears to my eyes! It was just to sweet! Janitor comitting suicide because JD died. *sniffle* this is just to sad

Poor Eliot. I like this,the way you wrote it,its sorta rythmic or w/e k um

DONT BE A NINNY PICKER!

Sincerly Emria

That was the most depressing thing I've read in a long time. But it was so beautifully written I can't hate it. Seriously, amazing job. Excuse me, now I have to go watch funny Scrubs to make myself stop crying. But again, well done.

sad, pretty, and well written.

I like the concept, I like the way it's written and I almost like the pairing (not a slash fan is all) but if the Janitor smashed his skull in when he fell, would they really have him in an open casket? I know they can do a lot these days, but I'm not sure about that?