Reviews for Worldly Secrets
Talonwalker chapter 7 . 11/17/2017
Very good story!
Guest chapter 5 . 6/5/2017
The analogy for Harry's magic was really brilliant.
miu.sakurai.73 chapter 7 . 12/21/2015
y nuevamente me llenas de alegria de leer este fanfic!
7 capitulos, largos, pero muy entretenidos :D
vysirez chapter 7 . 9/24/2015
I like your story more then I expected to be honest, I basically know nothing about FF8 or any other FF, so wasn't sure how that would work. You tend to do a fairly good job with the characters, but there are some plot holes that are frustrating.

I have a really hard time buying the scenario in chapter 7. You made claims about how powerful Dumbledore is, but really I have difficulty seeing how he would deal with terra magic. He simply doesn't have the right kind of defenses, not to mention a complete lack of physical capability. As some have said, the first Obliviation was unfun, but I could buy it, but doing again just really poisons things. It makes it really obvious that you are contriving things to remove Harry's powerups so that you can keep things fairly close to cannon.

This is complicated by the fact you seemed to have ignored what you did, so Harry runs off yelling about how Dumbledore was trying to obliviate him, and then suddenly he turns back up as school with no apparent memory of that and a bunch of other things. How retarded are all of the teachers and students. Not to mention, as some other reviewers have said, there is no real reason Harry has to go to Hogwarts, there are other schools out there.

So all in all, I like the story, and I will likely read the next one, but there are some major plot holes that could be better done. Thanks for sharing your work, and I know this is an old story, so you have likely much improved since then, but I try to leave reviews when I can.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/1/2015
dude fucking really? sure obliviate him again why don't you and bind his power too because sure arbitrary powerdowns sure are fun right? pffff you're really pissing me off
Nenjax Ursus chapter 7 . 4/16/2015
I have loved the series so far and am looking forwards to the next one.
kuroyuki96 chapter 7 . 10/7/2014
Another amazing story
I thank you author of this marvellous story for writing it
It is fun and thrilling and yet manages to spark some fear in me
Wonderful just wonderful
I hope to read more ...xD
Ill b moving on to the third part of this series now!
(((o(*゚゚*)o)))
Winter's Folly chapter 6 . 7/17/2014
Wasn't he offered to be taught by madam Pomphrey?
Winter's Folly chapter 5 . 7/17/2014
Wonderful analogy.
Winter's Folly chapter 4 . 7/17/2014
Oh, you cruel ebil little rugrat!
BlazeVein chapter 1 . 6/30/2014
Okay I buy Harry still Hermione's friend, but that jeoluos pig of Ron Weasley? Nop. And Ginny? totally wrong there, in cannon Harry just want to keep the ONLY family he knows. but here?, again what it is the point of an AU just to do same thing? *frustrated reader*
Ddragon21 chapter 7 . 1/13/2014
man this is stressing. When will dumbledor learn he is going to lose. however you did do well with this. Most stories make dumbledor frustrated and he can't do anything or takes no action. Just word bantor.
Ddragon21 chapter 6 . 1/13/2014
man this is getting intense and we dont know dumbledor's power level plus harry can't use most his magic.
Ddragon21 chapter 2 . 1/13/2014
Maybe he can go with someone from terra if he doesn't go with tonks.
Hexal chapter 7 . 9/29/2013
hey it been 6 years and when I went onto your home page I saw that u didn't make a sequil and was wondering if your still planning to if u r plz PM me and tell me so I can fav it ohh also plz add the IP address with it
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