A really good story :):)!

thumbs up.
but why dry, ouch.

As i have said before i so much prefer HaoxYoh but you are so good that even if you write HaoxChocolove i might like it. You are amazing writer really. Just like your sis!

Not bad. Hao/Ren is just plain awsome no matter how yuh write it. There's no doubting that. You did a brilliant job with this fic. It might've been nice if there was a little more teasing but it was still good. YAY! Ren was on the bottom! That's always the best one. I always think he'd be best on the bottom of any relationship no matter how yuh flip it.

DoO I enjoy yaoi fics like that oh yes today I read 7 of em ,and I love them all! I wish I could write somethin like that *_*

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i liked it, very nice. you should write more fics with this pairing

love it! it's so cute~! ... i find everything cute... now that's a weird querk... ANYHOW! Love the story! :D

Very enjoyable. Good job!

attempted oversoul! ha! as if i'd ever do something that stupid!

Alice: ahem...you tried non-stop for an hour then tried to do the shadow-clone jutsu THEN you...

SHUT THE HELL UP! god...any way...serious now *sqwee* aw! so friiging kawaii!

No, I've never attempted an oversoul. Just alchemy. lol.

Awesome one-shot thing! I've never read any HaoxRen…maybe I should go search some out.

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You've no longer got that title by the way, it's changed to 'shiny,shiny,shiny,shiny,shiny star!'

Thankyou so much! It was brilliant! A true master piece- and all for me! Yay! I feel special, and honoured that you took the time to write such a beautiful fiction for me! I'm so glad I requested this by you, no-one could have written it so perfectly.

I especially liked the end- the silence before Ren admits hat Hao has him finally.

Wonderful.

Thankyou so much Jessie!

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If I've ever attempted oversoul? -shifty eyes- Er...I have to leave a quick review cuz I gotta make my bed. -laughs- Or I could just make you do it for me...kidding kidding. Remember at camp how you were always cleaning up my crap? -laughs- Yeah okay you're not laughing. oh right this was supposed to be short. Okay, Hao is love! Ren is milk! (i lost)

-Joh