Cute and very sweet. I would love to hear this from Sasuke's perspective too. It has this casual nervousness to it you know? ... No probably not... That was a little bit of a weird wording. I like the fic. It just fits.

Love it.

Sweet~

Aw, the way it ended was endearing... And Naruto is so adorable here, "I was starting to feel pretty sexy and all" xD So cute.

Oh wow *_* I'm not usually one for 1st person POV, but combined with stream of consciousness is just...well...win XD This story was just such an amazing read that I couldn't NOT leave a review raving about its wonders hehe. The entire things just has this wonderful raw honesty to it that I can't imagine any reader resisting. And I'm sure you've heard it a million times, but this fic truly is beautiful. The whole sense of awkward exploration and tenderness between the two is just...*is speechless* XD I will definitely be adding this to my fav stories! Thanks for writing~ I look forward to reading more of your fics *_*

Great fic. Love how you wrote this. I could totally see them like that._

Aww... that was so.* I'm practically trying to keep down my squeels so I'm sounding like I have problems in breathing, u know like the astma thing.

And the last few lines were great. They made a big smile on my face which will last a long time.

Lastly, I have to say that you keep the characters well in their personality and that's a good thing because there are many writers who can't do that and the stories are somewhat.. ahem. (I'm one of those writers for example xD)

but anyway, I loved this. It told well how the first kiss can be exciting thing and reminded that many people are nervous about it.

So CUTE! :)

i like that book i've read it about 5 times already. liked the story it was nice and cute and the same time :)

Oh, wow, that was good. I loved the uncertainty, but the rigthness of it all at the same time. Excellent. It was just so perfect. .

Aw, that was such a nice one-shot! (_)

It's cute how Sasuke and Naruto are both a little confused and nervous but try to hide it. XD I really like this kind of stories, where a simple kiss shows all the deep feelings the two boys have for each other. And the better part is that despite the (wonderful) fluffiness of it, Naruto and Sasuke are still IC. (_~) So yeah, it was a beautiful story, sweet and cute and totally awesome! XD

Love it!.

This was so adorable and very much in character! Amazing job XD

Aww this was so cute! _ I don't particularly like NaruSasu or SasuNaru on a regular basis, but I think I'm beginning to like it more with all these adorable fics floating around. Lol I loved the last part, it was sweet:

I feel Sasuke stiffen next to me, and my heart drops somewhere dark and deep. But Sasuke turns on his side so he’s facing me, and then forces me to face him. “Good thing you figured that one out, usuratonkachi,” he says.

God, I love this bastard.

Absoloutly gorgeous piece of writing. An in character and very touching portrayal of the two of them finding their way around their feelings.

God they're so in character and yet the story is so cute. I love your 1st person POV. It captured Naruto's character beautifully. Wonderful first kiss fic I say! XD