| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Sorceror's Stone: Reduex |
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   EndlessHax chapter 2 . 5/17 This is honestly pretty nice. It’s very well structured and everything seems pretty solid. They’re characterised nicely and, despite being a two-shot, there’s enough content that I feel as if we haven’t been short handed. Harry and Hermione’s relationship is quite natural, too, and Harry doesn’t seem like he is very out of place. Neville’s character development is a nice touch as well. |
| slytherinsal chapter 2 . 10/31/2018 If you ever pick this up again, it's a pleasant and fresh approach to the trope |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/17/2018 Good |
| Phantom Of The Night21 chapter 2 . 1/17/2018 pls update |
| rowenasheir chapter 2 . 7/20/2017 Why stop? HP needs to wrote everythhing down before time wipes them |
| Ibskib chapter 1 . 7/26/2016 Three things that stuck out for me: The inclusion of Ranma-style genderbending was a bit weird, as well as pretty pointless, it just muddied the waters a bit without really adding anything to the narrative. Harry acted a bit too much like a abused little kid, more or less ignoring those extra years of maturity he supposedly had, pretty annoying. That and the way he kept oversharing about his timetravel, a rookie author mistake in the genre, completely forgetting that his friends aren't the people he knew when he was older. He obviously hasn't ever heard about the only way to keep a secret. The romance is also too early it's slightly unrealistic and creepy to have 11-12 year olds in a romance, and talking about love in a romantic sense, made ten times more so by Harry's supposedly greater mental age, in most places that age difference would be inching towards criminal territory at the very least. Third year is probably the earliest such things could work without it feeling too much like an author is writing Pedo!Harry There were other errors, typos etc. but these were the most grievous: Legimancy - Occlumency Erisland - Erised Parsletongue - Parseltongue a Parsletongue - a Parselmouth herboligy - herbology |
| HeyPyre chapter 2 . 4/6/2015 What? no update since 2007? That's OVER 7 years ago... What a shame, i really liked this story |
| Angel SilverWinter chapter 2 . 2/11/2015 Great story |
| NabikiB chapter 1 . 6/16/2014 Jusenkyo Spring Water. Yeah, unmistakable to any Ranma fan. |
| Philosophize chapter 2 . 3/23/2014 Please don't abandon your story... |
| Starfox5 chapter 2 . 12/31/2013 A very entertaining story, with a nice jusenkyo twist. I am curious if this will go further. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/28/2013 Please continue |
| Harry198764 chapter 1 . 12/26/2013 You should of made it so he couldn't change back from a girl it would of been more interesting. |
| shugokage chapter 2 . 12/6/2013 I truly wish there would be more magically if I to the top of the page. Great story thanks! |
| Keena3105 chapter 2 . 11/29/2013 update again soon please! :) |
