I really liked this chapter. Aside from the romance progression, the connection established between Naruto and Sasuke was a very nice touch.

Wy he want to become hokage? he will be killed if he not kyubi.. being hokage you will protect who hate you.. please he also kid and be more realistic with his goal (maybe strongest ninja in the world not become villagers slave)

You're Naruto is retarded. He just got beaten to death and he wants to still be hokage of the people who would try to kill him again? Fucking christ shitty fanfiction.

OK no I'm out. That's just dumb.

I mean, technically, thunder is a sound. Ergo vibrations in the air, ergo not lightning.

got half way through and once you said about him losing to them soon.

honestly this has gone on long enough and its utterly stupid. Have you forgotten about his body ? again with his broken fingers against itatchi. have you forgotten your OWN writing ? or have you just nerfed tf outta him once giving him power ?

his body is OP af. His strongest most powerful weapon is taijutsu, so WHY tf is it not ? and why tf is he so weak compared to what he is meant to be. Its like once you gave him his doujutsu you forgot about everything else.

Already...? Normally people don't get that close that fast. They world still be usingSan especially if you base it on real japanese culture... Just saying.

Hey ok I love your story so far this is actually my second time reading it.

Kind of sad it's been 11 years, nut I understand as a fellow writer how jard it is for people to write and post.

why complian at all if hes powerful if every other cherecter ,sasgay ball lickers, is op as fuck why cant naruto be?

Hi, Itachi. Fancy seeing you here.

That sounds like a you problem. Not a me problem. (reference to the last part un the story.)

. . . He smokes . . . ?
How pathetic.

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Personally, I think this will turn out pretty well