Cute and funny

Hahaha very nice. She knows what motivates her lol

Mmmm... loved the tease.

You go usa lol

Loving it was great 1 shot go serena

yeah... i would do the same

:D lol

How could anyone flame you! This was just great! So fun and just Kawaii! Continue writing such one-shoots you've got talent in writing such short stories(hadn't red all of your works still but I'm on my way of doing it.)

This is a cute and funny story. I really liked it!

There are some mistakes though - I'm guessing you type very fast, hehe. Other than that, I must say that I loved the end :]

Kisses,

Cla.

i really like this one its funny

lol fabulous story

oh sneaky! Serena is such a bad girl sometiems...lol. awesome!

good, but I it leaves the reader a little unsatisfied. I mean its a great little short, but it's almost too short. There is so much potential in this story to expand on.

Don't get me wrong, I'm not asking for a sequel... ;) however wouldn't it be funny if in the rush to get out of darien's apartment she mixed up their clothes! talk about a riot! And you could have a tense moment where finally darien is down to his boxers and loses. You could make that be a wonderful little freak out moment where he decides whether or not he'll take them off... etc.

So great start, great plot, but definitely needs fleshing out. You should consider revamping this. Its a very worthy story.

i love love love this 1 so fregin much gosh but i was wonderin y they are a bit short plz write more

Great one-shot!

Can't wait for the sequel!

*hint hint*