I really enjoy your writing style and how you interpret characters; it's like you expand on their personalities instead of relying solely on what the anime reveals about them. This shows in /all/ of the work I've read by you so far.
Ordinarily I'd wish for more romantic or sexual content in yaoi fan fiction, but your interesting style more than made up for it. Your work, if not anything else, is very exciting.

This is super cute! I really enjoyed it 3

My goodness.

My brain exploded from the epicness XD

No but really the imagery here was excellently rendered and the relationship was well defined without obvious words. I like showing not telling and you did that particularly well with the dream Mugen had about finding Jin, which was a well done metaphor that I enjoyed.

THE ENDING WAS AMAZING and I wish this could continue, but as all good one shots come to an end, so must this one.

Very nice. Very... Jin and Mugen. If there was ever slash in samurai champloo, this would be it. 3

So fucking awesome, espcially the dream sequences. Very nice post!aestethic-but-very-WTF-they-can't-do-that-ending.

ahh, I say, as if I know everything.

that was good.

That was so cute! Great writing, too. Well done!

~WY

very well done, it puts a very interesting spin on the character dynamics. so many jinmugens are out of character and ruined by excessive raunchyness, but not this one, very nice story! quite well written too!

real cool

-burbles inchoherently for a moment- That ending. It was...just the most awesome thing. The whole story was great, the undertone of longing, the small subtle ways that you could tell, you could just TELL. And the ending. OMG. I loved the way Mugen brushed Jin's wrist. It's so simple but so erotic at the same time. Gave me the shivers. I love how you can portray passion without them glomming all over one another. Though the fuzzy beans was a nice touch.

Wonderful. Excellent. Brava. I'd squeal like a fangirl (which I am) but I'm in the library and I don't think that they'd appreciate it. You came reccommended on fanficrants and I'm glad I took them up on it. :D Thank you for making my day.

~grins~

wow um wow you just killed one of my alltime favourite shows i hope your proud

An absolutely gorgeously written story. I especially loved the ending and how in character it was for Jin. The emotions were real and understated, similar to in the actual series, and it played out at a perfect pace. Major kudos to you for such fantastic writing, and I hope to see more from you!

- E.D.

well, "ah" !

A wonderful story!