You stated in the first chapter that Ichigo's Dad and sisters were away for a week, but at the start of this chapter (that clearly follows along the previous one) they are suddenly there... You need to work on your consistency.

Please keep updating I love this couple T_T

AHAHAHAHA! I didn't know Toshiro was that short! xD Hahahah~! He's like a foot shorter then me xD And i'm 13~! xDDDDDDDD

Can't wait for the next chapter :DDDD

I agree he is small & cute. XD loven it so far keep up the awesome workXDXDXD * thums up *

Damn it post the next chapter plz

''of his - no, Ichigo. Bad! Not yours! - Ha''

XD I loved that.

AND OMG I CAN'T STAND THE CLIFF HANGER

you are awesome, just you need a bit more description on where the characters are...I mean, one moment there at school, then on the way, then at home-. a little bit more description would help.

And LOL Toshi-Hana, thats so cute! Teehee! X3

hey l0ve the st0ry y0u sh0uld s0 c0ntinue

luv bella

aww, i like this. i love how Hanataro acts all tough. i can't wait to read more. up-date soon please.

More! Onegai?

i rielly like the story it vary cute.i don't rielly have much to saye sorry.

awws so cute i love Toshiro anyway i cant wait for the next chapter

what the answer to the riddle?

lol its a great story

E! Hitsugaya! SOo adorable. Lol, this story is amazing. Write more. Pretty please with sprinkles on top?

This story is amazing! I absolutly love it! Please update soon.

I really enjoyed this story. Will you continue it, please?