NO NO NO!
Why did I click on this?
My heart couldn't even handle it from Gregor's pov.

Bruh, I honestly thought I was over his death, but here I am crying again. Very well written.

This is so good . . . And sad... a
Ares!:(

This is so sad, but I love it. Great job with this.

You almost made me cry I was 1 paragraph away from crying I hated it when ares died.

I love it you did an amazing job keep it up. Ok now I sound like a teacher

I have not cried in six years and now I know that I will not last 7, this made me cry I hate you.

GAHHHHH I almost cried. I'm thinking of the part where Ripred said "if we can change princesses so easily, why not warriors?" and I imagined changing the warrior role from Gregor to Ares...

When Gregor was asking him not to leave in the book I was bawling..
Now,
I am dead TT

That was so beautiful. I nearly started crying.

I'm crying Ares life was so sad full of misery and pain and I truly belive that if Suzanne Collins were to create a backstory for Ares it would be like it is here. Ares was one of my favorite characters and I was sad when he died but at least he is at peace. R.I.P Ares.

sad

Superb. Absolutely amazing. This was sooo sad but soooo good. You really have talent.

This is a great one-shot, really playing on the strengths the typical one-shot length: character. Would you have a problem if I added this to my community "Gregor and the Good Fanfic?"

*cry cry cry cry cry sniffle*

so touching! i it! best story on ! make more like on twitchtip or something