| Reviews for Playing Pretend |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 2/17 Lovely story. I know there will be no sequel but would love more because I enjoyed the way you write this story. |
 almost-silver chapter 1 . 10/23/2019 i just realized i read this story for the first time over 10 years ago! when i didn‘t even have an account here! i loved it then and i am even more in love now that i found it again! it is sooo goood! the flow of the text, the intensity... i think in these 10 past years i‘ve never read a story that can compete with this! it sucks you in and doesn‘t let you go, it makes me so emotional and teary. so if you‘re still reading comments please have my eternal gratitude! |
| Overwhelmed chapter 1 . 7/7/2019 This is so good. Gotdamn |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/4/2017 I loved that it was written from Jin's POV! There are too few romance fics written from a male's perspective out there so this was refreshing! I also wanna commend you on your other SC stories that I absolutely adore! I ship both pairings but I always like reading more about the inner workings of Jin's thoughts and feelings because he's such an introvert and so mysterious :) Anyway thanks for this! |
| drealyn22 chapter 1 . 3/9/2017 Aw, I love this story so much. I've read it many times now and I enjoy it every time. The development of Jin's growing attachment to Fuu is well written, and it just pulls at my little fangirl heart strings. I love Jin. |
| K chapter 1 . 2/12/2017 Great story I wish it had more of a ending though |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/19/2015 I really, really, really liked this! ...And now I kind of wish I was Fuu. (Confessions of a Jin fangirl.) Great story! |
| Ripeahunt chapter 1 . 9/16/2015 I really liked this. Thank you. |
| VioletMoodSwings chapter 1 . 7/23/2015 I dig the Fuu/Jin pairing, thanks for the story. Have you thought about editing it for tenses? There's a mix of past and present tenses that can be jarring to read. Also removing all contractions from Jin's very proper voice would make him sound even more proper. I think you captured him nicely on the whole. |
| MissKatt18 chapter 1 . 2/16/2015 Yume, this was amazing! You're absolutely correct, there simple isn't enough Jin x Fuu fics out there and I loved this one! Thank you for posting! -MissKatt |
| in chapter 1 . 8/17/2013 AWESOME! This was sooo hawt! Loved the emotions and character development! |
| Foxysuji chapter 1 . 6/24/2013 Gorgeous story , Best depiction of how jin would have thought or behaved in this situation ,I have ever read.. Truly magical and painted the perfect picture... thank you for writing this.. it brought a smile to my face when i was having such a bad day .. hehe.. but then again what more do i expect from such an awesome artist as your self as well hehe.. totally stock your deviant art XD much love , FoxySuji . |
| sakurablossomhime chapter 1 . 6/22/2013 I understand you said you had to miss homework writing this story. God it was so good! I wish you would write a epilogue or at least a slide story another one shot just to let us know if they do you get together, if indeed a child was conceived, or if they just find each other again and he has to win her back or did she never forget their love in at 3 years time? Know this is one of my favorites it will always remain in my favorite though its complete. I wish you would reconsider seriously but thank you for the story it was a wonderful experience. |
| BigBoss3 chapter 1 . 6/18/2013 I AM CRYING SO HARD THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL, MAN. UGH SJWUIDCIJCHKJWDNCIJHWDI |
| Blue chapter 1 . 6/14/2013 Beautifully written. The end drove me towards a deep longing and sadness I thought that I'd never feel (being that it was a fictional story based upon the anime). I truly love how you write and I'm going to read more of your works. :) |
