I didn't review the first one because just as I was about to I noticed there was more, so here's for both.

the first one was so well done and so very sad, and this one, no less well done and almost as sad

they were both beautifully written and I think I might prefer this second version a wee bit more but it is terribly difficult to decide, too well done are they both.

so I'll leave it at this,

brilliant job and I am as always terribly jealous of your skill

I think I want more of it

Immediatly

i really liked this. i think you should definitely do a follow up when harry's birthday comes, but it's up to you what you decide to do. either way, i thought this was good, even if it was (like you said), bittersweet :)

I'm a little confused. The summary said DH slash but the story itself seemed as if it was onesided on Draco's part. There was no indication that he and Harry had ever been involved. It was never said that Harry and Hermoine were together, just inferred. But, it also seemed to me, that they were only together because Ron was dead. Is Harry interested in Draco? I never really got that feeling, just the feeling that Draco was interested in Harry; although why was there "a hint of a shadow" in Harry's eyes?

Wow, I really must say that you write really beautifully. I mean other then a few little mistakes it was flawless. It flowed really well, and your imadry was astounding. All I can suggest to you is that you maybe proof read a few times, but other then that... I wasn't even disapointed by the bittersweet nature of the fic because you exicuted it so well. I hope you keep writting.

what!where's the romance?or are you going for unrequited love because you just broke my continue this from harry's beautiful...get them together, i beg you.

Not bad, it wouldnt be a bad idea to continue this, but its your choice. Anyway i thought it was good. Keep up the good work. x3

You really should continue this. It's wonderful, and I want Draco to answer Harry's question. Anyway, thanks for the great read!