| Reviews for Illuminated Shadows |
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   waddiwasiwitch chapter 1 . 4/21/2015 This was wonderful. |
| sapphiretwin369 chapter 1 . 10/1/2012 I really loved this! Nice insight into what was going through Riza's mind and I absolutely love that she found flowers from him. |
| Freak-With-Issues chapter 1 . 5/30/2012 This is so beautifully written and I absolutely love the ending! You are magnificent! |
| Spooge13 chapter 1 . 7/31/2011 Hahaha, I loved this little one shot. 3 But-the author's note you left at the end is what totally made my day. YES MAKE BABIES YESSS. |
| Snowkid chapter 1 . 4/17/2011 the light makes more shadows, she should've turned off all the lights |
| Shikabane-Mai chapter 1 . 3/19/2010 Oh my god, I love this! This is exactly what Roy should have done in the actual manga! (Well, maybe he should have stayed even longer until Riza returned home, so there could be more Royai). |
| blue-crystal-9 chapter 1 . 1/26/2009 That was so great. And I totally agree with your comment about Roy carrying her away into another country and making lots of babies. They should have done that ages ago! ;) Lovely story, really great writing! :) |
| RedAmaranth chapter 1 . 1/17/2009 Ah! I loved it! I loved the "Don't give up" note. Absolutely wonderful ] |
| volepitofregret chapter 1 . 10/9/2007 Excellent psychology, and a well-written Riza to boot. You showed that combined with her normal wariness, a fear of the shadows can be truly terrifying. Also how all that was needed to calm her was three words. I totally melted. XD 9/10, great job! |
| momiji-k chapter 1 . 6/10/2007 I like your thinking! :) I thought right away at the part with the flowers that he should give them to Riza, of course! I really got a smile out of the "make lots of babies" comment. As for your story I thought you did a great job with a situation we have yet to explore in the manga. It realy must be frightening to retrun home after such an encounter. Great imagery and descriptions. I hope to see more great Royai fics from you. |
| emeraldcyclone chapter 1 . 6/9/2007 Good stuff, good stuff. You really ought to keep up with the Fullmetal fanfics. Your writing is fantastic. This peice, as breif as it was, was very well done. You did very well at giving the 'moster lurking in the shadows' type of feeling to this story. Your intent, I figure, obviously. . . but you did so well at bringing that feeling about. Well done! ] |
| winglessfairy25 chapter 1 . 6/8/2007 That was a very well-written piece. i really like it. it was simple yet still cute.. keep up the great work! Erinn~ |
| fighterNOTlover chapter 1 . 6/6/2007 Absolutely awesome! |
| OTP chapter 1 . 6/5/2007 that was totally kick ass i loved it very well done yay write another one |
| Anne Packrat chapter 1 . 6/5/2007 Nicely done. Riza's reaction with the lights rang true. |
