First chapter is great: Naruto tripping over himself and spraying ramen in Sasuke's face made me chuckle. It's well structured and easy to understand (though follows the more clique "Tsunade knows Dumbledore" trope). Though I would like to point out that no ninja would question why they need to protect a client, even if he seems like a "normal boy". Overall, starting off strong!

I’m literally crying my eyes out. I don’t want anyone to die TT waaaaahhhhhhhh

Ok like wtf! You say you will rewrite for no good reason actually, and then you post 1 freaking chapter and discontinues. So pointless...

awwww i really wanted sakura to just punch the dragon in the face

I finally realized what Neji and Sakura meant by 'enlarging certain things' after rereading this fan fiction after about 7 years. Ahh, childhood innocence~

It seems like Sakura is the main character so far and sasuke seemed like he was crushing a bit in Sakura... is this a Sasuke/Harry slash or no?

That bonus would have been even better with the audiences reaction to Sakura's insane strength.

He's been trying to kill Harry using different people's bodies for the past three years,

Guys, I think we just found Orochimaru's long lost twin.

Damn... I know that you're not really allowed anything other than a toad, cat, or owl... But couldn't Naruto have gotten a fox? I know he's got the summoning scroll for the toads... Ah whatever! Makes sense so I can't argue!... Damn it...

Hm, I would have liked it if they weren't undercover and just acted like badassed... But what can you do... It's already written...

doesn't sasuke have the rinnegan? he'll need to disguise that shit.

how does a translation jutsu even work? this is't goddamn majic, you can't place a jutsu onto an inanimate object willy-nilly. that's why sealing exists in the first place!

why the heck is tsunade defiling the 1st hokage's necklace? isn't that disrespectfull of her? i know he's her grandpa but still!

also, this assignment feels awfully mundane to be sending naruto, sasuke and sakura on. that's taking 3 S-class threats out of the village for about a year. that seem's pretty wasteful. a single ANBU could get this mission done.

Well technically for Sasuke, he did in fact die. When he had the curse mark and put in that basket, he is technically suppose to be dead for him to reach curse seal level 2 so yeah, he did die already. Not sure about Sakura though but still that was funny as hell. Good show with Trewlanly.

Story sucks. give up writing

good story

I...have an urge to strangle you. (Yes, I'm a violent person).
WHY FOR THE LOVE OF GOD DID YOU HAVE TO RE-WRITE THE WHOLE DAMN FIC?!
It could've gone worse. The screaming. I'm refraining myself from writing too much profanities in public. You're lucky.
But I just have to say..
THIS FIC IS AWESOME!
even though it would have been better if it was finished...